Date: 03/25/08 11:48 am Title: Chapter Six - Kendra
wow this was an amazing chapter!!!! i think that kendra should forget about asshole craig and go out with anthony! why did anthony just disappear? i got the impression something is up with him! please please update soon!
Date: 03/14/08 09:05 am Title: Chapter 5 - Craig
I was kind of rooting for "end things", actually. I mean obviously, even if he didn't, he'd never live up to her needs and such. You ARE going to update again soon, aren't you? I kind of thought the story was discontinued.
Author's Response: Yep...going to be updating really soon, actually. Maybe even today. I am 3/4 done with Chapter 6...so we'll see what I can do! I agree about Craig though....he just isn't worthy of Kendra. Thanks for the support! Story was never discontinued...just on a long hiatus. lol. I plan on finishing it through though.
Date: 03/10/08 07:03 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Craig
Aww, great update! You left me torn between thinking Craig's an asshole, yet understanding where he's coming from at the same time... which is hard to do! Good job! I'm glad you updated; hope you keep 'em coming!
Author's Response: Aww...thanks. Thats what I was hoping to do...leave the reader torn between feeeling like Craig is an ass, but yet kind of feeling bad for him too. Guess I pulled through! You rock! Thanks for all of your support with this one! It really means a lot to me!
Date: 03/10/08 06:25 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Craig
what a dumb son of a bitch! he deserves to rot like a rotting deer carcus on the side of the road for 2 weeks.
Author's Response: lol...tell us how you really feel! haha. Thanks girl!
Date: 09/23/06 07:23 am Title: Chapter 4- Anthony
wow just another awesome chapter!!!! the poor guy! lol please PLEASE update soon!
Date: 09/22/06 03:00 pm Title: Chapter 4- Anthony
Can't wait to see where this is going! Hope you update soon!
Btw, do you read Lurlene McDaniel? Her books were my all-time favorites - probably why I'm enjoying your story! If you have no idea what I'm talking about, check her out - I'm sure you'd like her stuff! :)
Date: 09/22/06 02:56 pm Title: Chapter Two- Craig
This is great so far!! I hardly ever read original fiction online, but I love stories like this, so yours caught my eye, and I'm getting into it already.
My only bit of constructive criticism would be to watch your tenses. Don't switch from past tense to present tense and back to past tense - this chapter does that in places. If you get a chance to go back and edit, that's one thing you might want to watch for.
Other than that, your writing is great!! You really get into your characters' heads, and I like that - makes it easy to relate to them and understand them. :)
Date: 09/12/06 08:17 am Title: Chapter Three- Kendra
Very well written ashley... good story!
Date: 09/12/06 08:16 am Title: Chapter Three- Kendra
Ashely its a really good story. please send more.
Date: 08/18/06 07:50 pm Title: Chapter Two- Craig
Date: 08/18/06 02:35 pm Title: Chapter Three- Kendra
awesome chapter!!!!! sounds like kendra may have a new love intrest in the making!!! update soon!!!!!!
Date: 08/03/06 07:06 pm Title: Chapter Two- Craig
wow another great chapter!!!!!!! i love thia story! cant wait to see another chapter