Date: 11/27/08 05:19 pm Title: Chapter 11: Land Down Under
cute chapter.
and i a way i can understand alyssa's thought. but yeah, it won't get be that easy but she should give it a try!
Date: 11/27/08 04:54 pm Title: Chapter 10: Jack And Sally
awwwwwww the letter is so cute. i just wonder, what else does he have to do to prove her that he loves her and won't leave her?
but... nice idea of her, the trip to australia :)
Date: 11/27/08 12:11 am Title: Chapter 9: Study Time...
this one was so cute... you could feel how they are ment to be. and i love it that he found her list. this was so important for him to read about it. but anyways, i hope she'll tell him face to face some time.
Date: 11/25/08 05:14 pm Title: Chapter 7: Absence Makes the Heart Grow Fonder
i read till this chapter now. and yes it is like i can't stop reading.
i felt like i went through all the emotions they went through especially nick.
i can understand him in the last chapter. first it felt like everything he wanted finally came true and then she came up with that point. but maybe he can deal with it cause later on she will see that she wants the whole relationship and let everything know about it!
Date: 11/24/08 04:15 pm Title: Prologue: Beautiful Woman
Okay... Just came accross your story and started reading it. and... i kinda love the prologue so i'm definately gonna read more. actually can't wait to read more of it haha.
Date: 09/15/08 05:59 pm Title: Chapter 4: Birthday Suit
Okay, I figured I should leave you comments on what I've read so far. I love the relationship between Nick and Alyssa. You can tell that they're really close friends, which is of course a good basis for a relationship, but can also make things soo awkward when making that transition. I'm curious to see how they'll handle that. I also really like the three girls together, Nick's right when he says they're like the girls from Sex and the City haha. The idea of their pact amused me quite a bit, but I also thought it was really sweet. And Nick loves her?! Somehow I think Alyssa is not going to be responding with "OMG Nick I love you too!!" Great start to what I'm sure is going to be an awesome read!!
Author's Response: yay! Thank you! I didn't realize you were all the way back here! Hehe nonetheless you'll most certainly enjoy the whole ride!
Date: 11/24/07 05:46 am Title: Chapter 27: All Good Things Must Come To An End
aawww man this chapter made me cry thanks a lot but great job with the story
Date: 11/24/07 05:42 am Title: Chapter 26: Happy Holidays
uh oh wonder whats gonna happen, almost at the end
Date: 11/24/07 05:24 am Title: Chapter 25: Family Ties
awesome job with the chapter it was good to have janes approval
Date: 11/24/07 05:14 am Title: Chapter 24: Fantasy Land
awesome chapter probably the best. it had be turned on for sure damn girl you are gifted
Date: 11/24/07 04:48 am Title: Chapter 23: Happy Anniversary
oooohhh awesome job this is getting exciting
Date: 11/24/07 04:18 am Title: Chapter 22: Dealing With The Pain
very good chapter it rocked
Date: 11/24/07 03:35 am Title: Chapter 21: Strange Days
oh no i hope she doesnt miscarry
Date: 11/24/07 03:08 am Title: Chapter 20: On the Road Again
very good chapter i was shocked to say the least
Date: 11/23/07 06:56 am Title: Chapter 19: Tiny Dancer
well done with the chapter i enjoyed it