[Report This]Date: 07/11/06 05:33 pm Title: Chapter 16: Tying Up Loose Ends
Loving everything so far, although knowing there's a sequel I'm worried as to what kind of cliffhanger there might be lol
Author's Response: The sequel is going good so far, lots of drama, I hadn't intended on writing a sequel I actually intended on making this one like 40 chapters or so but I decided to go in a little different direction.
[Report This]Date: 07/11/06 07:38 am Title: Chapter 16: Tying Up Loose Ends
Man oh man....I can see I am already in for a crying fest lmao I didnt cry on this one, but I can just tell I am in for it...and thanks for giving me the heads up as well lol....I will make sure I got a box of tissues handy lol.
Author's Response: Welcome! Yes have a tissue box handy, if not from the sad parts but from the sappy romantic parts too! lol I'm glad you enjoyed it!
[Report This]Date: 07/11/06 01:47 am Title: Chapter 13: I'll Be
What a great story. Can't wait to see what happens next in the story.
Author's Response: Thank you for your feedback! As always it's very much appreciated to hear what you think!
[Report This]Date: 07/10/06 04:19 pm Title: Chapter 10: Jack And Sally
that letter about made me cry....damn I hate being an emotional pregnant woman when reading romance stories like these lmao. That letter reminded me of my old letters from my fiance lol...I cannot wait to read more....this is definatly a fave story of mine :)
Author's Response: Thank you! It gets more emotional from here on out so be prepared!
[Report This]Date: 07/10/06 11:39 am Title: Prologue: Beautiful Woman
It's definitely refreshing to read something that uses complete sentences, makes sense, has correct spelling, and no giant plot holes. Thank you! :) lol I'm enjoying it so far!
Author's Response: Plot holes those things bug the crap out of me too!!! Anyways thanks so much for your review I'm glad you like it so far, and as for grammar I try my best it's hard to catch sometimes. But thanks so much for your feedback!!
[Report This]Date: 07/10/06 06:46 am Title: Chapter 6: The Chemicals Between Us
LOL I couldnt help but laugh at the fortune cookie thing....haha my friends and I do that all the time!!!Its so funny I love it!
Author's Response: The "in bed" game, been playing it since junior high, I always thought it was cute and that it would be cool to incorporate into a story.
[Report This]Date: 07/10/06 06:34 am Title: Chapter 5: Long Weekend
Another wonderful chapter....I cannot wait for more....
Author's Response: Awesome I'm really glad you like it, I've working on this one forever it seems sometimes lol.
[Report This]Date: 07/10/06 05:55 am Title: Chapter 4: Birthday Suit
You are just going to leave me hanging at I LOVE YOU?!? Man oh man you like have to update soon lol...this is gettin good.
Author's Response: LOL If you think that's bad just wait til the ending of the story (there will be a sequel I promise!)
[Report This]Date: 07/10/06 02:11 am Title: Prologue: Beautiful Woman
Thank you for writing something with decent grammar. I can't tell you how hard it is to find stories that are well written. I thought this was great! Great description and word choice. I can't wait to see what else you have to share!
Author's Response: Grammar is seriously a tricky thing! I'm a perfectionist though so I always read and re-read to make sure I didn't miss anything but sometimes you miss stuff ya know? Anyways thanks so much for your feedback it's very much appreciated!
[Report This]Date: 07/10/06 01:02 am Title: Prologue: Beautiful Woman
Very good start so far....this kind of reminds me and one of my close friends lol...we arent as close anymore because I moved away, but anyway I cannot wait to read more :)
Author's Response: Thanks I'll be updating it shortly along with my other story on here. =)
