Date: 06/14/08 06:48 am Title: ***Thats when it happend*
This story is starting to develop. I'm liking it so far. A couple of tips:
1) Be sure to check your spelling and grammar.
2) When you're telling a story, always keep it in the same perspective. This story is obviously being told in Nick's perspective, so the details of what's going on, on Brian's end of the conversation isn't needed. Keep it in one perspective to help the reader from having any confusion as to what's going on.
Other than that, the story is great! I'm off to read the next chapter.
Date: 06/14/08 04:31 am Title: When its done, its done!
This is a good story, but you need to go back and fix some spelling and grammar errors. Also, Nick's full name is spelled Nickolas, not Nicholas. It's great start though!
[Report This]Date: 01/04/07 10:00 pm Title: Earings and Rings ~ Repost!
This is getting so good I cant wait to read more
[Report This]Date: 10/26/06 12:07 am Title: Earings and Rings!
OMG! I just finished reading all the chapters and they are great! I've missed reading your story so you better have a new update soon, missy! lol! the part about "looking for her earring" was hilarious and i literally laughed out loud. it was great! well, bye!
Date: 10/25/06 11:27 pm Title: Earings and Rings ~ Repost!
hi manda! it seems like forever since ive been on. but dont worry i haven't stopped reading, my internet's just been cut off so i have three chapters to read, now that i have internet. im so happy to be back!
talk 2 u l8er lol
bye!
[Report This]Date: 10/09/06 10:33 pm Title: Earings and Rings ~ Repost!
Great, Great, Awesome, Marvelous.........Loved AJ's comments, Brian and Nick doing piggyback races, the searching for Keira's earring. Give us more soon as you can!
[Report This]Date: 10/09/06 03:44 pm Title: Earings and Rings ~ Repost!
she still needs to tell him the truth! having sex in an elevator isn't going to fix anything! LOL Good update...post more soon!
[Report This]Date: 10/07/06 07:11 am Title: Earings and Rings!
Damn girl !! I can't believe that he is gonna have a ring on her finger !!That is crazy but when is he gonna find out about Maddie thats just killing me !! LOL but great update girl !
[Report This]Date: 10/04/06 03:21 am Title: Earings and Rings!
OMG what the hell she's waiting for????? Nick want to marry why do i smell big big trouble!!
[Report This]Date: 09/11/06 02:51 pm Title: behind closed doors
I'm so confused....post more soon.
[Report This]Date: 09/10/06 07:51 am Title: behind closed doors
MORE PLEASE AND SOOOOON!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 09/07/06 11:18 pm Title: A summers sunsrise
its good!!!!
[Report This]Date: 09/06/06 12:08 am Title: behind closed doors
Wow!! That was deep! About time Nick told off Isabell. Kevin sure has kept a big secret for a long time. What's Nick going to do???? Please give us more soon; doing awesome Manda!! Sure hope you get to come back to WW sometime!
Author's Response: Hey Hun...
Yea im sure everyone was like **damn stick it to her, you tell her Nick!* haha, im not to sure, I am in a GREAT mood. I wish i was still back at WW, but to make a story short im addicted to shopping not just clothes but food and movies just addicted to goin out and havin a good time. unfortunately that means Bad news for me! I dont have a credit card and unitl I can manage my money I think its gonna stay that way *loL* but once i get a lil bit of extra cash in the bank im going to invest in credit card. Make sense?
Yea kevin has kept a big secret for the long time, I have been forshadowing a lot. I dont know if people pick up on it or not. The truth always comes out one way or another. I apologise for the long wait though! I really do.
Thanks for the Feedback, its greatly appreciated!
love ya lots,
oxoxoxoxoxo
~*manda*
[Report This]Date: 09/05/06 07:13 am Title: behind closed doors
Hey girl its lilchica86 from WW and i just wanted to say damn !!I can't believe that happened i hope you can post another update soon !! Oh yeah i just posted your link to your story on the WW messageboard . If you would like to know what messages are left for you on the MB you can e-mail at sk8rsrok69@aol.com and i will gladly send them to you ! Again Great update !!
Author's Response: Hey Hun =)
Thanks for reviewing, I know my updates take a while. Truth be told im busy *loL* So is a lot of other people to though. As soon as I get a Visa Card, i am comming back to Weird World for sure! I can't get a membership unless I have some type of credit card *loL*
Thats a Bad idea for me, right about now. I like to spend money! I love to shop!! *loL* and that would be dangerous!
Anywho i am so happy you are still reading, I know it takes a while. just have one question though and be honest does it seem to jumpy thr story does it make sense why things are the way they are! and does it Make sense why keria was so hesitant too tell nick in the first place?
*********Thank you Sooo much************
For still posting my story!! =)
That makes me so happy, of course I would love to see what people are thinking the good and the bad!!!! Thanks for reading sweetie!!
It really means a lot to know that people are still reading, cause personally when I dont get many replies I dont really know if people are enjoying it or not! you know? *loL*
Okay im sure im rambling, but you took the time to reply, So I am taking the time to reply Back...
Uhhhh, make sense? *loL* Im sure it doesn't !
Love ya! *muah*
oxoxoxoxox
~*Manda*
[Report This]Date: 08/20/06 08:25 pm Title: ***The Backstreet, Well kept Secret***
WOW!! Awesome! This is getting interesting. I want more LOL...
Thankx for the update!
