Date: 01/03/08 06:55 am Title: Chapter Ten :: Coming Home
excellent chapter the ending of it and nicks poor broken did and charge were great!
Date: 01/03/08 06:42 am Title: Chapter Nine :: The Perfect Date
good job with this chapter glad to see my second favorite bsb kevin there. aj and howie are being asses and are getting on my nerves
Date: 01/03/08 06:19 am Title: Chapter Eight :: Sweet Surprises
wow id love to have nick run at me like a football player and pin me to a wall!
Date: 01/03/08 05:52 am Title: Chapter Seven :: More Than Expected
good job with the chapter i was thinking of reading more this morning at work and im excited i get a chance to read a bit now
Date: 01/02/08 07:34 am Title: Forty-Three :: Ultimatum
*frustrated growl* DAMM?IT BRIAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU ASSHOLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'M GOING TO KICK YOUR F*CKING ASS SEVEN WAYS TO SUNDAY & BACK AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
GRR. This story is SO frustrating me right now!!!! And poor Baylee & Nat hafta suffer because Brian is being a MAJOR dickwad & Leighanne is a conniniving, lying, shit-faced bitch!!!!!!!!!!!! DAMMIT!!!!!!!!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! So ?I can smack Brian silly, until he FINALLY getsa some damned sense knocked into him!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Date: 01/02/08 07:17 am Title: Forty-Two :: Shining Stars
YAY!!!!! About damned time Nicky told SOMEONE she was his fiancee!!!! Yeesh!!!!
And his sisters & Brian are royally pissing me off!!!! Dammit! Andf Natalie, back the f*ck away from JC!!!!!
~Lenni~
Date: 01/02/08 07:11 am Title: Forty-Three :: Ultimatum
okay, i like jc and all, but it needs to be nat and bri together! i will be very willing to burn the witch at the stake if it will help solve the problem! and that so makes sense for the reason why she isnt pregnant, but it makes you wonder why brian is just ignoring it! ARGH! hey, i have an idea. ill strangle him then have nat recesitate him back to life, and if she doesnt wanna do it then i will get alana to do it, and if she doesnt wanna....then ill do it!!!! :D
Date: 01/02/08 06:57 am Title: Forty-One :: The Right Way
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SHE SAID YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHOOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!
A.J.'s such an asshole! Somebody shove a dick up his ass & shut him up!!!!!! Lol.
And BRIAN THOMAS LITTRELL I AM GO?ING TO KICK YOUR ASS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *growls angrily* You Bastard!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Date: 01/02/08 06:56 am Title: Forty-Two :: Shining Stars
geeze! finally nick! i mean, yeah vin diesel is hott but sheesh! you shouldnt let your girl be all....with him haha. on to the next chapter!
Date: 01/02/08 06:42 am Title: Forty-One :: The Right Way
i KNEW he would propose! i could tel when he was dressing the way he wanted and not how everyone else wanted. that was just so sweet! and i could kill brian for being with leighanne just for the sake of the baby. i mean, i guess i could understand to make sure that she doesnt do anything stupid while pregnant, but he needs to frickin tell nat about it! and yes i am reviewing on my own without lenniluvsbrian haha.
~Felicia
Date: 01/02/08 05:14 am Title: Chapter Six :: Raining Adoration
wow the chapter was HOT excellent job with it
Date: 01/02/08 04:57 am Title: Five : Chasing Temptations
aaaaww such another sweet and excellent chapter very good job
Date: 01/02/08 04:36 am Title: Four : A Real Girl
yay another great chapter that was so sweet nick with the kids and him crying
Date: 01/02/08 04:25 am Title: Thirty-Eight :: Saying it to Him
Thank you for that honest reply in regards to Islam and the hijab. I didn't mean any disrespect or harm by my comment or suggestion. However, I'm glad that it was more of an ignorance derived from the character than rather the authors, which is what I was trying to ascertain.
Author's Response: Do you realize that if you actually sign into your account that you can reply to co-written stories in your own name? Brilliant. *blushes* Forgive my stupidity on that part after I prove to you that I am not ignorant. *sheepish* But, thank you. We don't mind explaining our actions as long as one is receptive to hearing our answer instead of just disreguarding our reasoning completely. We are not our characters. Trust me.
Date: 01/02/08 04:20 am Title: Three : Encouraging Comforts
another excellent chapter this story is amazing so far though i admit i wanted lana with brian at first
