[Report This]Date: 09/26/06 01:28 am Title: Chapter 5
hhhmmmmm...I wonder what the problem is??
OMG--I love it when a guy wears colone--I like the "Tag" name brand--geez--it smells soo good!!--lol--aw--I loved that Basket ball scene with Natalie and Brian that was cute--and Nick and Avery--aw--cute pairings!!
Good chappy!!
trina
[Report This]Date: 09/26/06 01:18 am Title: Chapter 4
OMG!!!!
I LOVED THIS CHAPTER!!
They finally got to meet the boys!!--yay!!--aw--poor Natalie--she reminds me of myself--lol--not thinking before I speak--lol
oh my favorite line ""You've never had a girlfriend to cheat on."--LOL!!!--That was a good one...aha--I lovee it!!
good chappy hun!!
trina
[Report This]Date: 09/26/06 01:09 am Title: Chapter 3
aaawww--I feel so bad for Natalie :(
This chapter was soo sad...but hopefully this road trip will do them good--and maybe they meet up with some guys AKA Backstreet??--lol
good chappy!!
trina
[Report This]Date: 09/26/06 01:05 am Title: Chapter 2
Paul just HAD to be nosy eh??--lol
aw--I can't help but feel bad for them...
Oh I've been there--theres moments where I hate men too--but in the end...you can't help but love em--lol
Oh yay!!--road trip!!--glad to see the girls keeping their heads up throughout their struggles :)
good chappy!!
trina
[Report This]Date: 09/26/06 01:00 am Title: Chapter 1
aaawww---I feel bad for the girls
[Report This]Date: 09/26/06 12:12 am Title: Chapter 7
it's getting really really good great job!!! keep updating!!!
Date: 09/25/06 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
i "wrote" a story like this once, a very long time ago, with my best friend, too! of course, yours is written up and very nice! i'm enjoying it! keep writing!
[Report This]Date: 09/25/06 11:18 am Title: Chapter 1
GREAT STORY!! I LOVE IT!!
