Date: 06/25/09 01:08 am Title: Prologue
I swear I thought you were part of Breathless my apologies then...:)
Author's Response: it's okay. :-D Thanks again for coming back and reading. I hope to have the next chapter up soon.
Date: 06/19/09 02:07 am Title: Chapter 8: Alexander
Yeah you got that right, where did you come from? Almost three years for an update...but I'm glad you did I love this story.
I feel so sorry for Ant, the ones or the one she loves the most will be the one that caused her-her demise. Great chapter, I cannot wait to read more. I just hope I do not have to wait another three years to get another update lol!
Question, Are you going to update your other stories like 'Breathless: An Online Serialized fanfic'?
Author's Response: Thank you so much for coming back after too many years between chapters. I am glad you like the new chapter I was worried about it since it's been so long between updates. I don't believe I am a part of Breathless, and if I am, whoa I need to really get my head back into things. For the couple of years the only fanfic I've been active with has been OOCarter, with a bunch of other great writers. :-D
Date: 05/10/08 07:57 pm Title: Chapter 7: Alexander
Incredible. Absolutely amazing. Please update soon, I can't wait!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. This story I definately want to continue but first I have to remember where I was. Please be patient I will try my best to update. Thanks again, your review means a lot to me
[Report This]Date: 04/21/07 10:08 pm Title: Chapter 7: Alexander
Great update! I cannot wait to read more por ant I do not think she will find any happiness poor being.
[Report This]Date: 04/20/07 05:06 am Title: Chapter 7: Alexander
good chapter, update soon :)
Date: 02/16/07 08:57 pm Title: Chapter 6: Benjamin
Great to know cause I love the story but this last chapter it was too short and i did not appreciated to be left hangin...girl you know you got it going on lol! I cannot wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 02/15/07 09:17 pm Title: Chapter 6: Benjamin
yay you updated, can't wait to see what other BSB comes in to the chapters :) update soon.
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it, I am getting into the "meat" of the story if that's what you want to call the section where the boys come into play more. :-D
[Report This]Date: 02/15/07 05:26 pm Title: Chapter 6: Benjamin
Great update! But it came to end soon though, eventhough is not my liking the lengh of the story I enjoy it very much and I cannot wait to see what happens next.
Now I see how the twin sisters fit into the story or at least I think I do. They are decendent of Deidra right? Well I guess I have to wait and see... and also see if they ever going to find out about that they are decendant of Diedra and how much Ant love diedra and her children...
I cannot wait for more, can I have more?
Author's Response: Well I'm still writing Chapter 7 ... it's been slow at work so I get a few bits in here and there. I PROMISE seven will be a long one (even if you don't like the length I hope you'll like the chapter.) There is just so much to put in this I might have to split this next chapter and then that means I'll have to split a few more chapters making it even longer then planned. *sighs*
I'm glad you are enjoying and I'll try not to take as long to have the next chapter up.
[Report This]Date: 12/30/06 06:20 am Title: Chapter 5: Victor
Oh whoa! Can I have more cause I'm very intregue lol! I cannot wait to find out more..
Author's Response: I hope I don't disappoint in the later chapters. I have the next one written I just have to type it up, but after that it's all a mystery to me even. (well not a complete mystery)
[Report This]Date: 12/30/06 04:49 am Title: Chapter 5: Victor
That was good. Update soon.
Author's Response: Will do ;)
[Report This]Date: 12/13/06 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 4: Dierdra
Poor diera how can she die like that. But I hope that dispiteful women get what she deserved...but once again Ant its alone and this time she lost the only thing that tide her to her roots and bit of heart that she had left. I hope she gets to find the baby before its too late.
I hope an update soon!
Author's Response: I'm glad you are liking it, and I SWEAR the boys are in this story :-D
[Report This]Date: 12/13/06 03:48 am Title: Chapter 4: Dierdra
So good, Update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you I'll try, I have 1 1/2 more chapters handwritten I just have to type them and post them. :-D
[Report This]Date: 12/07/06 11:18 pm Title: Chapter 3: Claudette
getting really good update soon.
[Report This]Date: 12/04/06 11:59 pm Title: Chapter 3: Claudette
Poor Claudette couldn't take the hard labor after the beating. Matter of fact maybe he was resposible for her going to labor eventhough that was never mention...I guess I'm doing a parallel story while reading this one to try to explain things hehehe.
Now I can see why she was looking the right patner like kevin to procrate a child a child that it might never die cause it will have both qualities from vampires and humans. And a family that would neve die on her well thats my ideas that are coming up when I tide the stories and the thiss one together. I might be wrong cause hey Im not the writer but who knows I might be right or close to it.
Keep going I'm loving it I hope to have an update soon!
Author's Response: Claudette was difficult, at one point her chapter almost disappeared but I decided I needed her in it to show yet another change in Antigone.
Though Peter wasn't always going to be guilty and still not be guilty ;) Time will tell. :-D
[Report This]Date: 12/04/06 11:10 pm Title: Chapter 2: Miriam
I cannot believe Miriam did that to Ant especially when she was rise as sisters. Not even to say that she was family atleast a distance family or something.
And then leave the baby like that not even care that it was an incent child of any wrong doing. But I'm staring to see now how Ant began to change and she began to change because of the treatment and situations she was involved in the daily life. But atleast she always have to care of someone that might keep just a glimse of love in her...cause believe it or not she care enough or love Kevin, for her to choose Kevin overall the others to be with her.
Oh by the way the story when it gets to Howie, there will be an explanation on his sexual preference you know a little glimse of his past before the issue? Oh whoa girl you got it going on you have me hook with this fanfic like ,hmmm I see it like a good book that I cannot put down I'm addictive lol!
Author's Response: Thank you, Miriam developed differently I actually had her at one point (in my head) flat our betraying Antigone, and in another version I had her very loyal and loving. I think this was a nice mix.
I'm glad you are starting to see connections. This was going to be the last one, but I thought that the boys before and after they were turned would make a good story too. (You'll get more Howie in that but it will touch on his sexuality in this one)
