Date: 02/27/14 01:32 pm Title: Chapter 11 aka chapter 1
Oh gosh this was so funny!! The first chapter had me going and I had to read the whole thing in a night! Loved the way you structured it - the whole back to front thing. I nearly peed myself at the whole AJ is special thing and Robin screaming at him so he could understand. Great fic! Oh btw, I had to go on a search for your last in the Mizpah series, it was on the second page of your profile when the others were on 5. I will get on to that right away! LOL On another note (although really continuing from the one I just departed from) you must write another comedy. You honestly had me in stitches!
Author's Response: Wow! I had forgotten I'd even written this lmao I'm glad you enjoyed it! I usually don't do straight up comedies unless they are short stories. I tend to lean towards the dramedy but I guess the other comedies I have are Four Santas Too Many and probably Total Kaos 24/7. I wish that when we list our stories we could sort them by genre. It would make finding things so much easier. I know it's a pain especially when you have as many stories catalogued as I do. Thanks for reading!! :O)
Date: 11/23/07 06:49 am Title: Chapter 1: Epilogue
This is SO funny so far, Mare!!!
Date: 01/12/07 09:01 am Title: Chapter 1: Epilogue
it was a little...mmm, choppier than your others but the technique was hard as hell, so it's understandable. but still, funny as hell. ;-) great job!
Date: 01/11/07 05:32 am Title: Chapter 11 aka chapter 1
that was funny
Date: 01/11/07 05:29 am Title: Chapter 10 aka chapter 2
so then it was nicks fault?
Date: 01/11/07 05:23 am Title: Chapter 9 aka chapter 3
ooohh nice job
Date: 01/11/07 05:15 am Title: Chapter 8 aka chapter 4
why does nick keep changing the name of the mouse
Date: 01/11/07 05:12 am Title: Chapter 7 aka chapter 5
aawww it peed aj
Date: 01/11/07 05:08 am Title: Chapter 6 aka chapter 6 hehe
oh yes my favorite part nick calling security on kevin
Date: 01/11/07 05:05 am Title: Chapter 5 aka chapter 7
nicks so dumb but i love the kid
Date: 01/11/07 05:02 am Title: Chapter 4 aka chapter 8
brian doesnt curse or lose his temper? i loved that part
Date: 01/11/07 04:58 am Title: Chapter 3 aka chapter 9
hehe ajs slow...
Date: 01/11/07 04:55 am Title: Chapter 2 aka chapter 10
mmm love this so funny mare youre great
Date: 01/11/07 04:50 am Title: Chapter 1: Epilogue
excellent beginning i remember this
Date: 01/10/07 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 11 aka chapter 1
lol.. That was hilarious, but kinda complicated as well.. Great job though!