Date: 04/08/07 09:01 pm Title: Chapter 7
Oh their first kiss. Whoa! I can't wait to read more...
Date: 04/08/07 04:19 am Title: Chapter 7
Aww. Poor Howie
THEY KISSED!!!!! YAY!!!!!!!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: I've yet to have my first one but it was fun asking my internet buds what theirs were like.
Date: 04/08/07 03:43 am Title: Chapter 7
I like this story keep it up but one thing there is no ñ in Hermana. but it's still good. keep it up.
Author's Response: thanks lol. I hope it's not gonna suck b/c a mispelling ;p
Date: 04/08/07 02:04 am Title: Chapter 7
Aww... Very cute! I love how you use description in this story. t makes it very easy to visualize.
Author's Response: Thankyou. I hope that entrances you to read on =)
Date: 03/05/07 03:33 am Title: Chapter 6
Oye vey. Poor gal. Everyone but Howie is an asshole. There, I've said it - lol.
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Date: 03/04/07 05:44 pm Title: Chapter 6
That was execellent!! Great update but I seriously I can't believe her grand parents they are so oblivious to her situation that they help to make it huge. Because if they had stand for her grandchild when was necessary meaning the inicial interview in the principal's office this might have been resolve but they didn't. Instead of demanding they should take it slow, she lost almost everything she is not like them she is a child. They want her to be mature but that not the way to go about. They are pushing and she is pushing right back they are not going anywhere. Because what Jena did with her friends is againts the law. But because her grand parents didn't do there job right now she would not stand for herself by calling the police and making a report.
Author's Response: wow, nice. you're thinking deeper than I am. Good observation!!
Date: 02/26/07 04:42 am Title: Chapter 5
awww, I can't wait to read more.
Date: 02/25/07 05:39 am Title: Chapter 5
Wow. Pretty crazy. And I'd be SO pissed if a teacher stuck me next to my enemy! Lol.
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
P.S. I'm missin' Howie!
Author's Response: He's coming back in chapter six with a bang.
Date: 02/02/07 09:33 pm Title: Chapter 4
They are such idiots cluess people I read in a story...Poor lucca I just she becomes of age and get out.
Great update!!!
Date: 02/02/07 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 4
i absolutley love this story... poor lucca...she really needs a break...cant wait for the next update and soon...
Date: 02/02/07 07:16 am Title: Chapter 4
Oye. As if they can be rude to her & she can't be rude back. So not fair. I feel bad nobody listens to her.
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
P.S. I bet Howie will! Lol.
Date: 01/26/07 07:04 pm Title: Chapter 3
Oh my ! She is broken once again and I can't beleive that no one seem to care what is going on with her...but I love the scence that Howie stand his ground and didn't let her bully him. And Jenna eventhou I do not approve of what Lucca did to Jenna but she deserved it cause how can you be so cruel like that you when you only know about today but not about tomorrow and maybe Jenna would be in the same position in the future and she would not apprecaite that comment she did towards Lucca.
Great update i can't wait for more.
Date: 01/25/07 04:19 am Title: Chapter 3
Oye vey. As IF people are picking on Lucca just because of who she is & the teachers just stand yb & let it happen. What assholes!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Date: 01/22/07 07:08 am Title: Chapter 2
I like it alot!! I can't wait for an update! Please keep writing
Date: 01/22/07 04:23 am Title: Chapter 2
I know the no self-esteem feeling. Not caring what people think is easier said than done - believe me.
UPDATE!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
P.S. Wish that drawing were real so I could see it.
Author's Response: yes, I agree. Which is why it's so easy to write her as a character and she's the most fun character I've ever written about also.
The drawing is real. I didn't draw her eyes open but it's real. -)