Date: 03/24/09 02:12 pm Title: Chapter 8: No Mouths, No Faces
so glad they got away from those weird creatures! I wonder what awaits them in town though? Can't wait to find out :)
Date: 03/14/09 11:11 am Title: Chapter 8: No Mouths, No Faces
that was just plain creepy, i'm such a scaredy cat...i would have...I'm not sure. Seeing cookie cutter shaped people *screech* Thank god for Arthur!
Date: 03/04/07 03:54 pm Title: Chapter 8: No Mouths, No Faces
I am intrigued, and that's the short way of complimenting you. This storyline is superb. I love the way you're characterizing Nick. The way that his memories are coming back to him reminds me a lot of myself, and it's an interesting process to watch him go through. I'm not very good at guessing twists in plot, so this is a rocky water slide kind of experience for me. I'm loving it, and I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: I thought I replied to this comment! ^^; I really appreciate that you took time to read my fic, sweetie. I added a special note to you in the author's notes of the next chapter. <3
Date: 02/27/07 10:18 am Title: Chapter 8: No Mouths, No Faces
I hope that you update this real soon =/ I miss this story.
Author's Response: Sorry, I've been so busy with school and work, argh. Not to mention that I have midterms right now! T_T I will try to update ASAP, though.
Date: 02/07/07 03:45 pm Title: Chapter 8: No Mouths, No Faces
Damn, I don't know if I would last walking all day and only having a few hours of sleep at night but then again I'd be too freaked at those weird looking things.
Awesome chapter, can't wait for the next one!
Date: 02/06/07 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 8: No Mouths, No Faces
Sorry i haven't left a review for you since the beginning, especially after all the awesome reviews you left me on UMS. Well, I finally got all caught up and wheww! This story is DEFINITELY not something I normally read, but you know what? You have me hooked! Usually fantasy is SOOO hard for me to grasp, but you have so many interesting elements going on. If you need help ironing out those "logistic" problems I'd be honored to give you a hand!
Date: 02/05/07 07:53 pm Title: Chapter 8: No Mouths, No Faces
Those creatures are just a tiny bit creepy.... lol. I know I wouldnt want to be sleeping out there knowing that they're watching me. Good chapter! can't wait for more.
Date: 02/05/07 06:36 pm Title: Chapter 8: No Mouths, No Faces
ok, the creepy factor was (on a scale of 1 to 10) 23.5 for the odd shapes that moved away from the fire. i'm glad nick keeps his wits about him, though. and, yay, they're in "greener pastures" so whoo-hoo for them!
keep up the fabulous updates!
Author's Response: Awesome, I was actually starting to question the creepy factor of those things. Thanks for making me feel better about that! :D