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Reviewer: kevmylove Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/14/09 11:40 am Title: Chapter 10: Nine and Three-Quarters

Wow, she is aging pretty quickly, I'm definately curious to find out what will happen when she becomes a young lady. I love how he is with her now though, it's too cute, you surely organized this really well and I'm just loving it. Great job!

Reviewer: Moppy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/31/07 07:11 am Title: Chapter 10: Nine and Three-Quarters

Wow it still shocks me when she changes in age, lol it's cool though!

Great chapter

Reviewer: Elise Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/03/07 07:18 am Title: Chapter 10: Nine and Three-Quarters

Lene's aging process is quite riveting. I'm enjoying the angst, as strange people like me do. :)

I adore Nick's interaction with her, the unsure quality being very telling of life and how it is between big boys and little girls. The modesty he allows her shows his gentlemanly qualities, and the fact that he may not have retained his memory, but his respectful nature has managed to follow through.

It's amazing what remains of us even when we've been stripped of the experiences that have shaped us that way. And your ability to capture that very thing is amazing, as well.

Author's Response: Personally, I felt kind of embarrassed and concerned that Nick would seem like he had a lolita-complex or something. So I'm glad that his modesty was properly conveyed here. *grins*

Reviewer: starbeamz2 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/07 10:44 pm Title: Chapter 10: Nine and Three-Quarters

I like the reference to Harry Potter! This was another great chapter. I was wondering when she was going to get older because it seemed she was 5 for awhile. I think it's interesting how you're showing Lene's conflicting memories of things from the far past and the near past (I hope that made sense) and just how confused she is. This story really is unlike any other I've read...so Yay for you!

Author's Response: Yeah! I was thinking up a chapter title, and I thought that would be a good one, especially since it's Lene's age. Interestingly enough, the way that Other World exists in the in-between spaces of the regular one kind of reminds me of how the wizarding world in Harry Potter does the same. I'm glad you liked Lene's conflicting memories. Looks like between her and Nick, neither one of them has a clue what's going on. XD

Reviewer: ForeverRebel Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/07 06:30 pm Title: Chapter 10: Nine and Three-Quarters

This was a good chapter. More soon please

Author's Response: I will! Expect an update this weekend, okay? ^_^