Date: 03/24/09 06:48 pm Title: Chapter 11: A Revelation
Woohooo, Nick has powers! How cool is that!
Date: 03/14/09 07:28 pm Title: Chapter 11: A Revelation
Awesome he has powers!!
Date: 07/31/07 07:28 am Title: Chapter 11: A Revelation
Cool!!! Nick finally worked out his powers!!!
LOL @ the last sentence.
Great chapter
Date: 06/07/07 08:35 am Title: Chapter 11: A Revelation
Hehe. The ending line is so cute. Nickay loves his food, this is true. His bewilderment is so adorable; I love watching the magic being coaxed out of him.
Author's Response: This is another chapter that I was particularly worried about because it changes Nick from being the real world Nick that we know into one who can use magic. These were rather uncertain waters for me, but everyone's response has been so great!
Date: 04/30/07 05:47 pm Title: Chapter 11: A Revelation
Aww, that was cute! I liked how Lene helped him discover his powers, and you wrote of "unlocking the gate" in a way that seemed very simple and almost realistic--except, that it's not LOL Nice job! Update quick!
Author's Response: Whoops, forgot to reply to this comment, but I appreciate the review! I'm happy that the magical parts of the fic seem realistic because that was one of my main concerns in writing it. ^^; Will try to update soon.
Date: 04/30/07 01:03 am Title: Chapter 11: A Revelation
Hahaha....YAY Nick for figuring out he has powers! This was a cute chapter. Can't wait for the next =)
Author's Response: Sorry for making you wait! I'm going to try to add a new update tonight. ^^;