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Reviewer: Moppy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/31/07 07:41 am Title: Chapter 12: How They Met

I'm a bit confused with this chapter as it relates to earlier chapters which I only have a vague memory of, guess I have to go back and read those again.

What I did get was the feelings Lene has for Nick and her guilt for trusting Gunter, it was brillantly written.

Great chapter

Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/08/07 12:51 am Title: Chapter 12: How They Met

I just got caught up on what you have posted of this story, and I have to say, it is SUCH a cool story!!! I don't usually get into fantasy, but this one really sucked me in. It's really unique and just "weird" enough to be interesting without being too bizarre. I especially love Lene - the whole concept of her projecting her child self to help Nick and growing up the entire time is so neat! I hope you update soon!!

Author's Response: Wow, it is really cool to know that other people from the boards are reading my story! :3 Great observations, by the way. I'm happy to know that people can understand my ideas without me having to spell it out; I worry sometimes that I've not been clear enough. Thanks for the awesome review. It's definitely got me motivated to update (still have about half a chapter left to write, though ^^;)

Reviewer: ForeverRebel Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/08/07 06:33 am Title: Chapter 12: How They Met

I miss this story =/

Author's Response: I know, I'm sorry for the delay! The next chapters are... on the way. I feel really bad for not updating, but the boss is really riding me currently. I will try to update very soon!

Reviewer: Elise Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/07/07 08:43 am Title: Chapter 12: How They Met

Still hope, still hope... I feel that there's hope for her, for them. Nick's not the kind to give up, and it looks as though Lene, in whatever shape and size, is the same way.

Author's Response: I know, I absolutely love their sense of hope. Before I began to write, Lene seemed like a very weak, rather unlikeable character to me. But as I wrote more about her, this incredible strength began to show through. I hope everyone is still on her side in the future when... uh, stuff happens - not to give anything away!

Reviewer: ForeverRebel Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/17/07 06:50 am Title: Chapter 12: How They Met

Ooh. Very short but useful chapter. I liked it! And of course I stuck with you through the dry season. This is one of my top favorite stories on here. It's very unique and different and you're a talented writer. I hope to see more soon ;-)

Author's Response: Oh! You're so sweet. Really, that review made me glow. I can't wait for the summer when I can go back to posting regularly again.

Reviewer: starbeamz2 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/16/07 02:07 am Title: Chapter 12: How They Met

oooh...that was good. now we know how they met, and it was done in a very stealthy, subtle way. Great job writing it that way! It's like we can see the pieces from the past fall together, and I love it!

Author's Response: Yeah, I like this chapter, as well, despite its brevity. It answered a lot of questions that I had in my head as I was writing ONH. (Funny, you would think that as the author, I would know more about what's happening, heh.)

Reviewer: Moppy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/15/07 08:41 am Title: Chapter 12: How They Met

Wow I had alot of catching up to do!!!

Excellent chapters, 9 - 12, getting really interesting especially now since Nick's been told he has powers too!

Can't wait for the next update

Author's Response: Wow, fast review. I wasn't expecting anything for a few days. :D I'll try not to let too much time pass before the next update, but I probably won't have a chance until June. Thanks for reading!!!