Date: 04/03/11 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 15: Light and Dark
Wow... I'll be totally honest; although I was really excited to see this story updated, I actually was going to hold off on reading for awhile, until you got back to updating more regularly, because this story is so complex, I find myself losing track of what's happening in it when so much time passes between updates. At some point, I need to go back to the beginning and reread the whole thing to get that continuity back. Anyway, I still had the update email in my inbox and finally gave in to temptation and came here to read, and I saw your author's note. Now I feel like an ass for not reading sooner, but thanks for the dedication! I'm happy I could help you get your inspiration back for this story! :) It really is such an interesting, well-written story, and even though I don't read much fantasy, I find this one intriguing. I still love Nick and Lena's relationship; she is such a cool character! I hope you can get back to more regular updates and finish this thing eventually. Keep up the great work! :)
Author's Response: I realized that I had this review sitting around without a reply!
Just wanted to let you know that I'm finally getting around to wrapping up the story, so I hope you'll come back and see how it ends ;)
Date: 04/01/11 10:07 am Title: Chapter 15: Light and Dark
Ahhhh! I was so excited when I saw the e-mail alert for this story! I haven't had a computer since the beginning of February, I just now got a new one tonight otherwise I would've seen it a long time ago and reviewed. I enjoyed this chapter very much. I can understand why Lene wouldn't want to lose Nick, I would want to hold onto him too if I were her. But I've gotta feeling he's not going to be too happy with her when he figures out what she's doing haha. Update soon please!
Author's Response: Sorry for the late late late reply to this review! >_<
I just wanted to let you know that I'm finally getting around to wrapping up the story, so I hope you'll come back and see how it ends~
Date: 03/03/11 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 15: Light and Dark
Yay, I can't tell you how excited I was to see an email alert telling me this had been updated!! So good to see another chapter :)
Really enjoyed it, it's so imaginative. I don't like the sound of that fog which makes time go quicker, I wonder what'll happen next on their journey.
Author's Response: Sorry for not replying to this review sooner. I'm, like, criminally late! >_<
I'm finally getting around to wrapping up the story, so I hope you'll come back and see how it ends~
Date: 03/03/11 07:42 am Title: Chapter 15: Light and Dark
Wooohooo!! I'm first to review! I loved this chapter, it's so vivid. So, poor Lene is going to direct Nick the wrong way...uh oh...I see trouble. I understand her though, I wouldn't want to let go of Nick either. Glad you are back Christine!
Author's Response:
Yay, thank you for reviewing! I was a little worried that maybe people didn't like the chapter because I hadn't heard anything yet. I'm really excited about getting back into this story again. I think I have one more rough chapter to write before I get to some (exciting!) material that I'd already pre-written, so that's something to look forward to =3
