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Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/14 08:57 pm Title: Chapter 20: Vegas, Baby

Wow, okay. I admit this chapter had me a little confused at points. Kudos to you. Its hard to write as someone being someone staring at themselves as someone else. Writing that kind of dialogue and action is tricky. I was just a bit confused as to who was killed. Was it not Nick but a stagehand who had the magical powers? I'm glad Lene had that memory so this way she was able to see first hand how sketchy Gunther really is. Of course this happened in Vegas lol seems like a logical choice. I'm so happy you managed to squeak another chapter in. I'm looking forward to seeing how the whole thing plays out!