Date: 05/29/09 12:34 pm Title: Chapter 14: Apple Pie
I don't know how I missed this update!!! But I've just read it and I've got to say, that apple tree is scary as hell. Love the way they are developing their powers and hope Nick manages to get control of his soon.
Can't wait for more :)
Author's Response:
Sorry for the late reply!
If I can keep up the steam, I'll try to update sometime within the next month. *crosses fingers*
Date: 04/28/09 12:11 am Title: Chapter 14: Apple Pie
I really like your story. It´s really different and makes me want to know what will happen. I´ve been reading it for a while, before you had teh time out. Keep going. I will try to review as much as I can.Kisses!
Author's Response: Awwwww, thank you for reviewing! It's nice to get a new review from a long-time reader ^_^ I never know who's reading my fics, so I really appreciate that you took the time to say something ♥
Date: 04/27/09 05:07 am Title: Chapter 14: Apple Pie
I love it! I'm happy to see that Nick is making progress with his powers - it was cute that he just couldn't wait to wake Lene up because he was so excited about it haha. And the apple tree bit was crazy! but very very interesting too. I wonder where they've ended up? I can't wait to find out. I love how this comeback chapter was exciting from the very beginning right down to the very end and left us in suspence - great job as usual =D
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it! Writing constant action was really challenging, pheeew, so the fact that you found it exciting tells me that it turned out allright :)
Date: 04/26/09 08:29 pm Title: Chapter 14: Apple Pie
Ahh, I was so excited to see that this story had been updated again! And with an actual chapter this time! Whoo-hoo! It's nice to see it back, and you definitely delivered: awesome chapter!! Seeing the development of their powers is pretty cool, and the whole apple tree part was freaky! Can't wait to see where they ended up! Hope it doesn't take you two years to write the next chapter... LOL ;)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'll try not to make you wait so long for the next one. :O And OMG at your lightning fast review; I feel so loved (and maybe just a little whiplash, lol)
Date: 03/24/09 07:04 pm Title: Chapter 13: Shards of Porcelain
Well, I'm all caught up and ready for more! This story is brilliant, so different and unique. I love it :)
Author's Response: Thank you! The next chapter should be coming *very* soon! I've only got about 1,000 more words to write~
Date: 03/24/09 06:48 pm Title: Chapter 11: A Revelation
Woohooo, Nick has powers! How cool is that!
Date: 03/24/09 02:27 pm Title: Chapter 9: History and the Flood
For a moment I thought they weren't going to get across. This is gripping stuff!
Date: 03/24/09 02:12 pm Title: Chapter 8: No Mouths, No Faces
so glad they got away from those weird creatures! I wonder what awaits them in town though? Can't wait to find out :)
Date: 03/14/09 07:28 pm Title: Chapter 11: A Revelation
Awesome he has powers!!
Date: 03/14/09 11:40 am Title: Chapter 10: Nine and Three-Quarters
Wow, she is aging pretty quickly, I'm definately curious to find out what will happen when she becomes a young lady. I love how he is with her now though, it's too cute, you surely organized this really well and I'm just loving it. Great job!
Date: 03/14/09 11:24 am Title: Chapter 9: History and the Flood
This one was hilarious, with him and his freezing balls. Him being in such danger, and worrying about what he other word to call them. Hum...so now we have some of the background of Gunter and we know Nick has powers. Damn I'm starting to fall asleep again, but I want to read more...darn it. Very nice work!
Date: 03/14/09 11:11 am Title: Chapter 8: No Mouths, No Faces
that was just plain creepy, i'm such a scaredy cat...i would have...I'm not sure. Seeing cookie cutter shaped people *screech* Thank god for Arthur!
Date: 03/14/09 09:26 am Title: Chapter 6 Pt 1: In Which Nick Confronts
Oh, now that chapter was intense let me guess that, that man was Gunter, now he is seriously trying to get him. Isn't he! I couldn't help but laugh at Lene and her butt hurting...too cute! Damn, I think those are wolves that just broke in...I'm loving this...it's great!!! I'm hooked.
Date: 03/14/09 09:01 am Title: Chapter 5: Into the Woods
Wow, now that was weird and creepy. I loved that I could actually visualize it all happening, I love the way you describe things, not too much, not too little...nice! I love how Nick is so protective of her too.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the compliments! It usually takes me several drafts to write a chapter... First I write out my immediate ideas, and then with every re-read I add in more description.
I love the bond Nick and little Lene have~
Date: 03/12/09 06:57 pm Title: Chapter 6 pt 2: Getting Some Answers
This is definately unique! I wonder what they'll come across next.
