Date: 03/11/09 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 1: To Be Dead
OMG I'm loving this! It's totally different to anything I've read before! I laughed a the gnome biting his hand though, lol. Wonder where he is?
Date: 03/11/09 03:46 pm Title: Prologue: In Which Nick Sleeps
Interesting start! Wonder who or what Gunter is?
Author's Response:
Sorry for never responding to this review. It seems to have slipped under my radar. Hopefully, in the future we'll learn more about Gunter~
Date: 03/11/09 10:37 am Title: Chapter 4: Bye Bye, Baby
I had a hunch that would happen. This gets more and more interesting and I'm hooked, and I'm trying to tear myself away to get some sleep.
Date: 03/11/09 10:22 am Title: Chapter 3: PB&J
LOL!! "Yeah, gah," Nick repeated. "That's how I feel right now." that had me crackin up. The fact that he's taking care of this baby and holding conversation with her, is too cute!
Date: 03/11/09 10:06 am Title: Chapter 2: Friends, Strangers
Poor Nick, I feel so bad for him and his tummy! I would be pretty creeped out, if I was somewhere where there are no other people!! I'm wondering what Lene is? An angel? Hum, I guess I will find out later on. I cant believef that she jumped out of the castle and I'm imagining that she is the baby!! Now I wonder what is going to happen, when they wake up. Will she be older? Gone? Still there? I guess I'm off to read the next chap!! (sorry about the typos)
Date: 03/11/09 09:49 am Title: Chapter 1: To Be Dead
Wow, so weird, but i could picture him just walking on a lonely road, with houses like the ones here in Vegas that they all look exactly the same. I couldn't help, but laugh at the little knome calling him ugly and biting him. lol!!
Date: 03/11/09 09:34 am Title: Prologue: In Which Nick Sleeps
Wow, this story has sucked me in. I really like your writing style, and your description. Very nice. Off to read chap 2
Author's Response:
Thank you!
I'm happy you're reading my story. I'll try to keep the updates coming so you have plenty to read~
Date: 01/25/09 08:59 am Title: Prologue: In Which Nick Sleeps
*cough*update*cough*
Man! I should really do something about that cough...haha.
=P
Seriously though, Nick & Lene are missed...just thought you ought to know lol.
Author's Response:
Ahhhh, I want to say that I will have an update up soon, but I don't know if I will ever be able to post anything again. =( My hard disk failed unexpectedly, taking the second half of this fic (over 30K words!) with it. The only backup I found covers just up to the last chapter I posted here on Absolute Chaos. I want to say that I will sit and write ONH again, but the next half of the story is probably THE most difficult part to recapture. It was written during NaNoWriMo fever with brilliant spurts of inspiration that came from some unknown source. I'm afraid that if I tried to rewrite those lost chapters, it wouldn't do them justice and I don't want to write a subpar version of the original story.
Maybe someday I will find the motivation to write this again. Or maybe I will be able to restore files off that dead hard drive (highly unlikely). In the meantime perhaps you can check out my other story "On the Rails" http://absolutechaos.net/viewstory.php?sid=9453 about Nick during the Great Depression. It's a very different story from Nightingale Hill, but I can promise that I will update regularly and that it will be completed by the end of this year. I miss your reviews! It feels like all my readers for this new fic are an anti-social anonymous mob because they never review =(
I miss Nick and Lene, too. Perhaps after I finish "On the Rails" I'll be feeling energized from finally completing a story and return to "Nightingale Hill."
Date: 03/19/08 12:25 am Title: Chapter 13: Shards of Porcelain
Man, oh, man do I miss this story :(
Update pleeeeeease? It would make me super happy.
Author's Response:
Hey, sorry for the late response. >_< I REALLY want to take up writing this again, but because I'm still in Japan (until August) I have absolutely no writing time! I've tried to sit down a few times to work on this because I really miss this story, but I don't think I'll be able to get an update out for another couple of months.
Just wanted to let you know that I haven't forgotten Nick, Lene, or all of you. Miss you guys lots! <3
Date: 08/02/07 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 13: Shards of Porcelain
I love Lene's teasing at him -- that he messed up a lot. Hee! It puts them on the same level at times, despite any desparity in age. Exciting to see new abilities developing for the both of them. Christine, Christine! Must have more!
Author's Response: Heeh, you got an account, yay! I liked the teasing, as well; Lene's such a precocious kid~
Date: 08/01/07 06:07 am Title: Chapter 13: Shards of Porcelain
wow this is awesome...so im still not sure yet is nick actually _"the NICK CARTER" we all no an love or just a guy who sings an hngs out at a coffee shop...is this a au in all ways ? well anyways great story ...keep up with the updates ...gonna be great...are they gonna end up together? just curious tat would be kinda wierd bt at the same time she is already grown? never mind rambling..lol good work update soon
Author's Response: That's a good question! I think the answer should become clear in a few chapters. Thanks for reading. :)
Date: 07/31/07 11:16 pm Title: Chapter 13: Shards of Porcelain
Hahaha....that was cute. I was soooo happy when I saw you updated this! I hope to see more soon. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: I kept thinking of you every time I sat at my computer, trying to motivate myself to write. I have an idea on where I want the next chapter to go, and I'm finding out new things about Nick that I never realized, so I'm hoping to have an update for you soon~
Date: 07/31/07 07:47 am Title: Chapter 13: Shards of Porcelain
Yeah Nick in a apron cleaning lol
Great chapter can't wait for another update, I wonder if Lene grows up again or something bad happens before that happens again?
Author's Response: We'll just have to see, won't we? *evil grin* Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 07/31/07 07:41 am Title: Chapter 12: How They Met
I'm a bit confused with this chapter as it relates to earlier chapters which I only have a vague memory of, guess I have to go back and read those again.
What I did get was the feelings Lene has for Nick and her guilt for trusting Gunter, it was brillantly written.
Great chapter
Date: 07/31/07 07:28 am Title: Chapter 11: A Revelation
Cool!!! Nick finally worked out his powers!!!
LOL @ the last sentence.
Great chapter
