Date: 05/29/17 07:48 am Title: Chapter 9
Brian doesn't need her, she is a hot mess express for real!
Date: 02/12/10 01:14 pm Title: Chapter 21
Wow, just wow!! I've spent the last couple of days reading this story and have to say, loved every moment of it (as I do with all your stories). Seriously, you should look at getting this published as it's not what I'd describe as fanfic but more like original fiction.
I loved the setting, the characters, the way you describe things, it makes me want to go there! And of course I loved the happy ending where they kissed and Lance's little happy dance :)
Anyway, enough of my gushing, lol.
Date: 02/12/10 12:41 pm Title: Chapter 20
Oh no!! What a mess.
Date: 02/12/10 12:26 pm Title: Chapter 19
Ooo the waitress and Sarah's Dad would be good for each other :)
Hope Nick doesn't mess things up for Brian!
Date: 02/12/10 12:14 pm Title: Chapter 18
Yayyyyyyyyyyyy they got together!! That was so romantic and what a beautiful setting too!
Date: 02/12/10 12:03 pm Title: Chapter 17
I just love Lance, every girl needs a best friend like him!
So glad she finally got over Nick, but I hope it's not too late to win over Brian :)
Date: 02/11/10 01:58 pm Title: Chapter 12
Aww that was such a sweet and lovely chapter, think I'm falling for Brian myself! I love living by the sea too, I can't imagine not being able to hear and see the waves whenever I want to. San Fransisco is a place I'd love to visit sometime :)
Date: 02/11/10 01:33 pm Title: Chapter 11
That car salesman was a real sleazeball, urgh, I could just picture him!
Date: 02/11/10 01:17 pm Title: Chapter 10
Nick is such a bastard in this! No sooner is his girlfriend out of town, and he's charming Sarah! Loving it :)
Date: 02/11/10 12:30 pm Title: Chapter 8
Poor Brian! He should've just told her that Nick had a girlfriend instead of defending him.
Date: 02/11/10 12:10 pm Title: Chapter 7
Naughty Nick!!!! He's going to cause a lot of problems I see!
Date: 02/10/10 02:16 pm Title: Chapter 6
Ooo I think things could get complicated!!! Lol at Sarah's Dad's reaction to Lance.
Date: 02/10/10 02:01 pm Title: Chapter 5
Aww Lance is such a sweetie and I'm glad Sarah came to his rescue like that.
Date: 02/10/10 01:16 pm Title: Chapter 3
Brian's date sounds like a total bore! Aww, poor Sarah, being forced to go to a party in swimwear, how awkward is that!
Date: 02/09/10 02:26 pm Title: Chapter 2
Aww poor Sarah! Nick obviously has no interest in her at all. But poor Brian too, it seems that he really does like her and now she's going away!
