[Report This]Date: 04/05/07 03:55 am Title: Chapter 20
damn straight, what did you just do, Nick?! Kelly, this was perfectly executed, and I don't think you could've done this any better way. Now you've left Brian and Sarah split, even though Brian's officially free of his father, too. BUT...Nick is the one who knows all parts of the story now, so it's great if he ends up being the one to bring Brian and Sarah back together. So...fabulous job! *hands you 9298548594 gold stars*
Author's Response: lol I rewrote this scene like 3 different way and still wasn't sure how it was going to turn out. It makes me feel a lot better to hear you say that though, so thank you so much!!! (as always) Yay! only one more chapter!
[Report This]Date: 04/05/07 01:31 am Title: Chapter 20
OMG! Poor Brian! I can't believe Nick would think something like that!
Author's Response: Emotions are all running a little high. I'm sure no one is really thinking all that clearly at this point.
Date: 04/05/07 01:24 am Title: Chapter 20
oh dear x Nick was mad x Nick you still have time to make it right x
Author's Response: we shall see! one more chapter!!!
[Report This]Date: 04/03/07 05:20 pm Title: Chapter 19
You know I was reading this and I'm like hmm... everything is just falling into place TOO perfectly. There's no way that Brian is going to get off scot free with all the lies he's told. Now I'm completely psyched for a good Nick/Brian showdown! Something tells me its NOT going to be pretty... And I can't wait! Lol I'm such a sadist.
Author's Response: I'm a firm believer in all-too-happy endings, but I also believe that they must be earned!!! So in a way I guess I'm a sadist right there with ya cause I was just as excited to write that chapter as I am to write the end!! Hope you enjoy!
[Report This]Date: 04/03/07 09:43 am Title: Chapter 19
She is so going to be late x Thanx for the update x
[Report This]Date: 04/03/07 03:42 am Title: Chapter 19
Uh-oh. Nick the asshole is gonna accuse Brian of using Sarah to make sure their business didn't go south - but he really DOES love Sarah. WTF is so HARD to understand Nickolas!?!?!?! Nick is SUCH a SELFISH ASSHOLE!!!!!! *gets into ninja stance & is more than ready to kick Nick's ass*
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
[Report This]Date: 04/03/07 03:18 am Title: Chapter 18
WHOOT!!!!!!!! BRIAN GOT THE GIRL!!!!!!!!! *cheers n throws confetti*
~Lenni~
[Report This]Date: 04/03/07 02:41 am Title: Chapter 19
Yes! I get to live with Nick!
And wow he was mad....
I hope things don't go too poorly for everyone. :(
And now, I'm hungry. So yeah...
Muah. :*
[Report This]Date: 04/03/07 01:57 am Title: Chapter 19
I hope it's not too late, but ya know, you gotta have that drama come in. Everything can't be lovey-dovey all the time. I think you're doing just fine with Nick's anger, Sarah's confusion, and how it appears that everything is about to hit Brian in a bad way...You did really well building it up to what I'm assuming will be a really big next chapter. Can't wait! *throws confetti for you*
[Report This]Date: 03/30/07 05:47 pm Title: Chapter 18
Ok...two things: 1. It was really an "aww" moment when Nick was on the phone with Deanna and then another "aww" moment was when they actually finally kissed because Brian was in the "I'm so shocked, is this really happening phase?" And THAT was adorable.
2. Is she ever going to know that she was the one he was waiting for? Because she told Lance that there was someone else that he was in love with and she couldn't "go there". It would be weird if she didn't acknowledge the fact that he had told her there was someone else...at least so that she knows that she's the only one he's thinking about (which she is but she doesn't know that).
Anyway, great chapter! I loved it! I hope they hit the open road and have lots of G-rated fun LOL
Author's Response: I know... I know... grrr.. working on it. I'll figure out a way. I was kind of stuck on how o make it work so I figured that since I'm so close to the end I would just get it written then I would have a better idea of how I can make it work... sometimes the best way for me to get through my writers block is just to write the crappiest basic version and then go back to it... I know there's a way to make it work, I just haven't figured it out yet. Any ideas?
Date: 03/30/07 10:54 am Title: Chapter 18
oh sweet x WOW they are leaving, I know younger someone is not going to be happy about that esp if his g/f does sign that paper about the cars x by looks of things he was happy that he was going to work with his big bro x oh will happy that brian got his girl for once x up date soon
[Report This]Date: 03/30/07 05:53 am Title: Chapter 18
Well it's about time, yeesh.
And I was in this chapter... Sort of.
When is Brian going to tell Sarah that she's his Nick? >_< Er.... That made no sense....
Author's Response: dang it I knew that was going to happen!!! grrrrr!!! I have to figure out a better way to do that. I've actually been struggling with that question since I started planning this story. The total honest answer is that he doesn't tell her cause I need him not to or the end of the story doesn't work... I've been fighting it for a while now and figured just write it, get through it and then go back and fix it once everything's done cause then I'll know exactly how it all plays out. Maybe once it's finished y'all can give me some suggestions :) because I absolutely HATE when motivation doesn't work or when things are very "convienent" so I know I'll go back and fix it, I'm just not sure how yet. ANYWAY... thanks for pointing it out! I was wondering if people were going to do that. :) If you didn't say something I might have been lazy and left it... now it will drive me carzy until I fix it -lol
as for the "it's about time" comment, I think it just feels like that cause you're getting the chapters days and weeks apart. I just read them all the way through again and when I did, I didn't really feel that way. I mean for them it's only been like 3 days, how quickly must one move? I dunno though, I wrote it so I'm kinda partial... how about everyone else? What do you guys think?
[Report This]Date: 03/30/07 05:12 am Title: Chapter 18
Thanks for the update. It made me smile. I'm so glad they got together. I can't wait to see what will happen next.
Author's Response: You are most welcome... I wrote forever today cause I hate leaving ya hangin' (mostly... sometimes it's a little fun muhhahahahaha) anyway... thrilled that I made you smile :) Lots happens next, but I'm not telling what! We're actually nearing the end of the story! Yay! (and boo!)
[Report This]Date: 03/30/07 03:28 am Title: Chapter 18
AWE!!! Reminds me of my boyfriend and I when we realized we were in love with each other! :D
Author's Response: awe!!! I whis my husband and I were cute like that. haha we are sooooo NOT romantic at all. Maybe thats why I write so much cheesy romance?
[Report This]Date: 03/29/07 06:46 pm Title: Chapter 17
LOL...Yay for Sarah!
