Date: 03/29/07 11:09 am Title: Chapter 17
that good up date x she going to get Brian that wonder what Nick I hope he be happy for him but intil he finds out that she whats the me to cali, Im happy for Nick he find out that he loves his g/f before is to late x
I really do hope there is a big happy ending for both of the brothers
[Report This]Date: 03/29/07 04:36 am Title: Chapter 17
WHOOT!!!!!!!!!!! *pumps fist into air-literally* SHE'S OFF TO GET BRIAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HALLEJUAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
[Report This]Date: 03/29/07 03:32 am Title: Chapter 17
You can't leave us hanging there. Please update quickly.
Author's Response: goodness... I didn't realize how much of a cliffhanger that was until I went back and read where I left off. Sorry. But I'm excited to write the next part so it shouldn't take long!
[Report This]Date: 03/29/07 02:45 am Title: Chapter 17
*unties boxing gloves* And here I was looking for a fight and get flowers instead, what luck. :D
Except I'm a little hurt... Your discription of the kind of girl Nick needs, which made him think of Deanna... Yeah, that's totally me. Bah.
And there were a lot of witty lines at the end and I laughed, like out loud, honestly. *claps* Y-chromosome... Hahahahahaha...
Author's Response: aww, well I thought you deserved some flowers... (sticking with my cheesey romance and all) hehe. But I'm sure there's someone out there that would fight you if you really wanted. I bet Lance would let you beat up JC :)
[Report This]Date: 03/29/07 01:55 am Title: Chapter 17
If you don't update within the next two days, I will probably die from the anticipation! It's FABULOUS! Trust Lance to know who her heart has always belonged to LOL I can't wait until Brian tells her that she is his mystery girl. If that doesn't send her heart over the edge, well, then she's not even close to me LOL Thanks for the awesome update, Kelly! I hope you got the chapters I sent you, too *wink*
Author's Response: I have something very special planned :) I hope you like it... And YES I got your chapters and I DEVOURED them!!! Not I just have to write you an email. I'll do that tonight so you dont have to wait any longer.
[Report This]Date: 03/28/07 03:36 am Title: Chapter 16
Oye vey. They're driving me NUTS!!!!!!!!!!!! They NEED to hook up!!!!!!!! FORGET NICK AND RUN OFF TO CALIFORNIA TOGETHER!!!!!!!!!!! NOW!!!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: if you ever have children... I wouldn't reccomend saying that to them haha!
[Report This]Date: 03/28/07 01:20 am Title: Chapter 16
Oi... I hate love triangles...
I just rememered why romance annoys me.
Deanna ives Sarah the double cheek slap: "Obviously Nick never noticed you before and he's just a big flirt. Nothing has changed."
Deanna gives Brian the double cheek slap: "Do something already! Change your own fate!"
Deanna gives Nick the double cheek slap: "Stop breaking girls' hearts!"
Yeesh....
Author's Response: hmmm Deanna mus be pretty tired after all that slappin! So it's finally getting to you huh? I have to admit, you've lasted longer than I expected. :) But don't worry, they'll all come around really soon.
Date: 03/27/07 10:52 pm Title: Chapter 16
love it x up date soon x im so weird im the only one that feel sorry for Nick I know i just be going for Brian but anyway What Brian doing for Nick is so sweet he the best big bro x Yea Brian keep your dad away from Nicky
Author's Response: It's actually comforting to hear someone feeling sorry for Nick. Honestly, you're supposed to be shaking your head at him, but you're not supposed to hate him. He's a good guys. A little selfish and immature maybe but you can't blame him for wanting to be happy. That's really all any of them want, he's just the most agressive about getting it.
[Report This]Date: 03/27/07 04:52 pm Title: Chapter 16
*dabs at tears* beautiful! just absolutely beautiful! i think that's all i can say at the moment because i'm trying not to bawl in the middle of the computer lab LOL It was great!!! Poor Brian and Sarah. If only they knew...
Author's Response: Aww well please, no tears at school because of me!! (though secretly that makes me happy) -lol. Sarah you are wayyyy too nice to me! :)
[Report This]Date: 03/27/07 03:04 pm Title: Chapter 16
Hey long time no talk! Great chapter...but not the ending I was hoping for!! I especially loved the dialogue between Brian and Sarah. It flowed really well and wasn't cheesy like mine! I can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Hey! Yeah it has been a while. Did you get my last email ever of the last two chapters you sent me?? I hope I sent that e-mail and it's not still sitting in my draft box... I'll go check. Thanks for the comment about the dialog! I'm glad you feel that way. I was just telling Lenni last night before I posted it that I was having trouble with this chapter because it was such a heavy conversation. and we all know by now I can lay on the cheese pretty thick! Thanks hun! Look forward to talking to you soon!
Date: 03/26/07 11:27 am Title: Chapter 15
Wow gr8 story u have x Brian better watch out b/c when she finds out he been lying to her about Nick, she will be so mad also with Nick if she finds out about his g/f x It will be so funny if Brian going though all this trouble to keep both of them apart and all he needs to is go Nick and tell him that je (brian) likes her and can he back of lol but that would not happen x how old are they all?
Up date soon x
Author's Response: Awww thanks hun! I'm glad you're liking it!
[Report This]Date: 03/26/07 05:50 am Title: Chapter 15
Drama... Draaaaaaaaaamaaaaa....
And I love cheesecake. Mmm....
My Japanese teacher laughed at me when she asked me what I wanted to eat, and a thought about it, and finally said: "Ano... Chisukeki o tabete kudasai."
Haha. ;)
Author's Response: I happen to like drama... and thats a really long word for cheesecake! lol.
[Report This]Date: 03/26/07 03:39 am Title: Chapter 15
OMG!! more soon!!!!
Author's Response: Your wish is my command ;) enjoy!
[Report This]Date: 03/26/07 03:23 am Title: Chapter 15
Aww. I feel bad for them. They're obviously attracted to one another & we ALL know Brian loves her - but Nicky's gonna end up ruining it all no matter what. 'Cause if Nick does get her, then Brian never will & their business also goes down the drain. And if Brian gets her, all Nick has to do is accuse him of only stealing her in order to save their business - but, then the girlfriend thing would come to factor - basically, anyway you look at it, Sarah's gonna get hurt - & Brian's honestly not trying to hurt her, he's trying to protect her mostly, then save the business. He also doesn't want Nicky's gal to get hurt either. Damn Nickolas!!!! DAMN HIM!!!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
*throws confetti*
Author's Response: you forgot one... Brian also doesn't want Nick to hurt hiumself by doing something stupid. Sometimes people have to take drastic measures when they believe it's the right thing. Oye! all the craziness! I wonder how it's all gonna play out! (ok I already know how it's all gonna play out... I just hafta write it)
[Report This]Date: 03/26/07 03:11 am Title: Chapter 15
AHHH!! Kelly, what am I doing?! Obviously, I don't want Nick, I want Brian LOL This is getting so cute and so good, and he just has to tell her how he feels and she just has to forget about Nick...somehow. This chapter was adorable, their bet was cute, and the whole cheesecake part? How did you know that was one of my favorite desserts? LOL Keep those updates coming!
Author's Response: hehe, like Brian said, I haven't met a woman yet that doesn't have a major soft spot for cheesecake! haha. Yea for adorable chapters! You updated a particularly adorable chapter yourself today :)
