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Reviewer: Mellz Bellz Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/25/07 04:14 pm Title: Chapter 14

Ooh Brian is SUCH a liar LOL I'm kinda disapointed in him hehe j/k. But I have a feeling this is gonna blow up in his face...

Author's Response: well if you want to get technical... he didn't know EXACTLY where Nick was at the moment... just in the house. and Nick did tell him he planned on being gone all day... ok, yeah whatever, you're right. He's a big fat Liar!!! haha. and have you ever read a story where it all worked out without some sort of disaster? The question is not will it happen? The question is when where and how will he recover? ...if he can?

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/24/07 06:03 am Title: Chapter 14

Ooooh. Lovin' it!!!!! TMNT 4 & your fic all in one day - Wow!!!!! Now I'm even MORE hyped up!!!! Lol.

Yay B-rok got the gal - for now! Lol.

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~

Author's Response: Yes, TMNT was Good! It's scared my babies a bit though. I'm Donatello!!! you can by Mikey! or Raf, he's real good too!

Reviewer: brian_fan_4eva Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/24/07 03:00 am Title: Chapter 14

more soon!!!

Author's Response: i guess that means you like it... ir I leave ya hanging too much haha... sorry. But I promise I will always keep those pudates comming. I should have one up this evening! Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: nicksgal Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/24/07 12:14 am Title: Chapter 14

Gourmet corndogs huh?

Where am I?

And make her stop gushing over Nick before I start a fight. *readies boxing gloves*

Author's Response: you never know, there could be gourmet corndogs... and again patience... you'll be back soon enough. but you better make sure those gloves are tied tight. haha.

Reviewer: starbeamz2 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/23/07 10:58 pm Title: Chapter 14

so, if it's a wine and beer tasting festival and brian and sarah get sloshed and then *wink wink* i hope this goes romantically well! lovely chapter as always!

Author's Response: well there may be a bit about a ferris wheel, but this story is PG and Sarah's still underage, so there won't be any getting sloshed. Sorry. But there will be a lot of ... ---oops almost told you--- I can't do that! More updates soon!

Reviewer: Presley and Teri Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/23/07 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 14

Another great chappy!!! You're doing such a good job Kelly, great plot and characters

Author's Response: Aw thanks. I was just thinking that these characters don't seem as deep or evolved as some of my others... but I'm glad you like them... this one's definately more of a fluff story than WTMH or NYACS but hey? we all need a little fluff!

Reviewer: presley Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/07 03:10 am Title: Chapter 13

very good kelly. i love how you are trying to get sarah to hang out more with brian instead of nick...as much as i love nick in real life in this he just seems to be more of an arrogant jack a$$ and its great!

Author's Response: awww poor Nicky... I seem to do that a lot. Is that what I really think of him??? I'll feel bad if I ever meet him in person and he turns out to be a good guy... lol

Reviewer: nicksgal Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/20/07 06:55 am Title: Chapter 13

Awwwww... Brian. :) He and Sarah are a match. :)

But that Nickolas of mine... He better realize I'll pop him a good one if he cheats.

Author's Response: patience my dear, patience... Nicky hasn't cheated on you ...yet...

Reviewer: Anon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/20/07 05:15 am Title: Chapter 13

I love it! You definitely added an interesting twist in this. But I have to say that I'm worried about all the manipulating Brian is doing here. I bet it's going to backfire on him. Keep it coming!

Author's Response: Aww it wouldn't be a good lovestory if it didn't backfire at some point.

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/20/07 03:55 am Title: Chapter 13

Ooooh. Tricky Brian - hehe. Not good to start a relationship off by lying, but I understand his reasoning. He's trying to protect Sarah from Nicky 'cause he loves her so.

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~

P.S. Nicky's a jerk!

Author's Response: Yeah, its a tough one... but Nicky's not a jerk so much as just a silly whimsicle guy... (ok maybe a little TINY bit of a jerk...)

Reviewer: starbeamz2 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/20/07 03:18 am Title: Chapter 13

Aww, this is getting so cute and better and better! I'm glad their first date was her idea and not his. Of course, I'm not sure Nick will be so happy, but oh well. I don't really care LOL So, this festival, will there be a ferris wheel? Because ferris wheels are the epitome of romantic at a fair *wink wink* Keep those updates coming!

(i thought i'd let you know, that *gasp* there will be a new Remember the Music chapter up within the next couple days since you're its biggest fan and all!)

Author's Response: OMG, I about fell out of my chair when I read this!!! I was so excited!!! And I'd gotten myself into the mindset that there wouldn't be any more updates... YAY!!!!!!

Reviewer: brian_fan_4eva Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/20/07 03:15 am Title: Chapter 13

lol Bri's got it BAD! Glad to see an update! :D

Author's Response: sadly I got it that bad and probably worse for Brian... but you probably know how that feels ;)

Reviewer: presley Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/12/07 09:40 am Title: Chapter 12

kelly!!! this is yet another good chappy dear... i love how you are trying to get brian to get the courage to tell sarah.. it getting really good my dear. teri and i have a question to ask you when you get online next...

Author's Response: aww thanks! and my answer is yes. Just let me know what you need. :)

Reviewer: Anon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/12/07 12:42 am Title: Chapter 12

If that is what you called sappy...well, call me a sapaholic. I give a heavy dose of a sappiness in everything I do. Haha. Anyway, excellent chapter as usual. Can't wait for the next update.

Author's Response: hahaha this one only gets more and more sappy as we go, so you should eb happy!

Reviewer: brian_fan_4eva Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/11/07 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 12

Wow....I've been hooked, but haven't had time to catch up until today. Damn Nicky for going for her and forgetting all about his girlfriend!

Author's Response: I hear that! I never have time to stay caught up with everything I want to read! But, thanks for taking the time! I'm happy you like it!