[Report This]Date: 03/11/07 06:28 pm Title: Chapter 12
Ooh finally got myself caught up again on this story. I definitely love me some love triangles and this one is a juicy one! I almost am not sure who Sarah should wind up with cuz yea Nick is a player and all, but Brian isn't completely innocent either w/the way he's been manipulating things. I bet if (or when) Sarah finds out that Brian is doing anything he can to keep her and Nick apart its just going to send her further into Nick's arms to spite Brian. Oh i love it! lol
Author's Response: Mel, you're too faithful, I don't deserve it! -lol but I'm glad to see people reading this story. It's so different from a typical fanfic that I didn't really expect that people would. (it's still cheesy romance just not like a normal fanfic.) And you're right, Brian's being a sneaky bastard. Maybe she should end up with Lance. hahahahaah. Gay guys are fun :)
[Report This]Date: 03/11/07 11:24 am Title: Chapter 12
Poor Brian.
And I demand a sex scene from both him and Sarah as well as Nick and Deanna. *nods* Chop chop.
Also.... In the paragraph where Sarah is talking about how she loves the sea, you wrote "see" instead. :)
Author's Response: As soon as I get me some demon lovin'. Haha just kidding. Actually this story won't have any sex in it. In fact I've never actually written a full on sex scene. I'm not real big on the visuals... Welcome To My Heart had some PG-13 sexual content and "Cinderella" had some serious violence and sexual assult but that's unusual for me. Normally I'm pretty mild. Yo'll just have to imagine it... You want a good sex scene though, read the story that's featured this month. Those girls can write some hot stuff ;)
[Report This]Date: 03/11/07 10:06 am Title: Chapter 12
Aww. He was SO close! He shoulda told her that the one he loves is in love with someone else! My poor B-rokster!!!!! *hugs him ever so tightly* I'll love you!!!!! Always!!!! Hehehe. ^_^
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
P.S. C'n I kick Nicky in the ass? Please? Lol.
Author's Response: I thought about having him say that but decided against it. I'm saving that for somewhere else :) But don't kick Nicky's ass. My story needs a protagonist!
[Report This]Date: 03/09/07 08:15 pm Title: Chapter 11
Yay for Brian1 Lol. He finally gets a break! Until Nick shows up out of no where again. Grr.
Gah! This was the last chapter!!!!! Nooo!!!!! I'm hoooked!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Brian + Sarah = Cutest Couple Ever!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: don't you HATE it when you get to the end of a chapter and there's no "next" button?!?!!? I reciently did that with "A Write Kind Of Love" I wanted to cry...
oh, and I thought that Brian + KELLY = Cutest couple ever... LOL!
[Report This]Date: 03/09/07 08:01 pm Title: Chapter 10
Aww. Poor Brian - he's trying so hard still. He should tell someone how he feels about Sarah, so they know. But, if he tells Sarah now, she will probably think he's just making it up to keep her away from Nick. Tell her nick has a girlfriend, dumbass! Don't let Nick ruin a good thing! Yeesh!
~Lenni~
[Report This]Date: 03/09/07 10:02 am Title: Chapter 9
Aww. Poor Sarah. She's caught up in this all without meaning to be. Tsk, tsk.
~Lenni~
[Report This]Date: 03/09/07 09:53 am Title: Chapter 8
Aww. God, I'ma cry for Brian. The poor guy. He tries so hard & has no idea what to do, & then he screws it all up.
Damn Nick!
~Lenni~
[Report This]Date: 03/09/07 09:49 am Title: Chapter 11
Wow! Sarah is a master! :o I need her to help me buy a car!
I hope Brian keeps her in Chicago with him... Meh heh heh heh.
Oh, in this paragraph: "After an hour and a half or so of paperwork...." Y ou switched to present tense for a little while....
Author's Response: SEE I RESOPND!!! I STILL LOVE YOU! and yeah, Sarah is an expert. She grew up in a garage :) I asked my father in law (a mechanic) about some easily spottable problems that used car salesman might try and get away with cause personally, I can put gas in my car and change a tire and thats about it... But I still lobe them! and oh man I would kill for one of those Porsches! That model is my favorite car. ps... thank's for the corrections! My brain is goofy sometimes.
[Report This]Date: 03/09/07 09:43 am Title: Chapter 7
*shocked gasp* BRIAN!!!!!!!!!!! As IF you did that!!!! SOMEBODY STOP NICK!!!! THE LIL' PRICK!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
[Report This]Date: 03/09/07 09:37 am Title: Chapter 6
Aww. Sweet ending to a chapter. And Nick - BACK OFF!!!!!!!!!!!! She's Brian's!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
[Report This]Date: 03/09/07 09:21 am Title: Chapter 5
Roflmao!!!! I knew she'd do it - jsut for him! Yay! I remember my Prom - I danced to Backstreet's Back in heels & a dress & I HATE both! But *cool* kids told one another to copy my dances moves, as I *knew* what I was doing-lol. And they played Shape Of My Heart for me too & I screamed the lyrics out while standing near the speaker - right next to it for Nicky's part-lol.
~Lenni~
[Report This]Date: 03/09/07 08:59 am Title: Chapter 4
I knew brian would NEVER let those cars go! Lol.
~Lenni~
[Report This]Date: 03/09/07 08:43 am Title: Chapter 11
A mystery, eh? I like it. I like it a lot. Muhahaha. Update soon, please!
Author's Response: hehehe I'm glad! And I love yours too! I feel special that I get to read it first!! I'll get an e-mail to ya tomorrow!
[Report This]Date: 03/09/07 08:24 am Title: Chapter 11
Kelly, Kelly, Kelly.... This is the update I have been waiting for my dear. It is getting good but as you notice in the other reviews I have said before that you are a great author...I would just like to remind you of that..You are a great and amazingly talented author. No matter what I am reading I always love it!
Author's Response: Hey! I read the latest from Teri, you're right. It was good. And thank you. I don't thin kI've told you yet today that you are too nice to me! But still, happy to entertain as always!
[Report This]Date: 03/09/07 07:19 am Title: Chapter 3
Hahahaha. Evil Lance - Bass. Hehe.
~Lenni~
