Dammit! You got me crying already & it's only chapter two!!!!!!! Gah! *blinks rapidly* LOVED IT!!!!!!!! I feel for them both - Sarah & Brian.

~Lenni~

Author's Response: Ahh, Lenni's readin' Whitmore Lake! I don't deserve such devotion!

Another greaatt chapter!! Love the twist! More than ten hours with Brian? A dream come true. I hope he wears her down. I'm so psyched for the next update. Hey, this might be a typo, so I thought I'd let you know..."Daniel kept his eyes calmly on the highway prepared for Sarah’s outburst but it didn’t come right away." Anyway, did you get a chance to see the other two chapters I sent you?

Author's Response: yeah, it's a typo... Those pesky names have given me the biggest headache!! Dee even told me there was one in this chapter and I still couldn't find it... THanks for giving me the whole sentance. now I can go change it.

sneaky Brian! i hope he doesn't keep screwing things up, though. and i really can't be mad at Nick in this because he just sounds like a little boy who sees something he likes and goes after it no matter what. i know he's not innocent, but he's too adorable-sounding to be guilty. does that make any sense at all? LOL

Author's Response: Perfect sense! In fact that's kind of what I was going for. You're not supposed to hate Nick or Deanna here. Yeah they're kind of causing trouble but it's supposed to be in an innocent way. Thats' what's so frustrating about the situation. Everyone is a little right and everyone is a little wrong... I sooo need to start Hensly btw! Just haven't gotten to it cause I decided to catch up on some others that have been sitting on my "to read" list forever, but you know I'll get there! You're one of my faves after all!

I was nowhere in this chapter. *pouts* But I was beginning to miss this story. :")

Nick.... If he brings her flowers... I'll step on him.

There were two places where names were wrong... I was "Cindy" and Sarah was "Morgan". Just thought I'd point that out! Good once again! :)

Author's Response: grrr that is so frustrating... I always proofread after I finish, then I put it down for a day and proofread it again when its fresh and I still can't manage to get them straight. I swear my brain doesn't even know the difference. There was a reason when I started writing this story that I had changed the names of all the characters and now its driving me crazy!!! Thanks though! I changed them for any future readers. And yeah, actually *you* have only a minor part from here on out... sorry. But the story is about Brian and Sarah after all. I was missing this story too. I just have had a hard time finding my groove since I got sick, but I think I am getting back into it again so hopefully I won't take as long to update as I did this time. Plus I'm like a chapter and a half away from being done with "Not Your Average Cinderella Story" so then I won't have that one to work on anymore. That should speed the process on this one. Although I have a lot of people wanting me to finish "The Day I Fall" next... (thats a Nick story) I dunno, we'll see.

it remind me of this movie with Harison Ford and Julia Ormond... I think Sabrina was the title but not sure... good story ... anyway all your stories are good you are just soooo talented!! :-)

Author's Response: Yay! 10 points for you! This is actually a remake of Sabrina! (one of my favorite movies) When my husband was teaching me how to write screenplays he told me to pick a movie and do a "remake" so that I could learn about story structure and all that. It really helped, I've learned a ton, but yeah, the stories are basically the same except different characters and situations... it's great practice. good catch! I was going to ask everone to try and guess what movie its based on when I had a little more posted. The screenplay I worte after this was totally origional... maybe I'll convert that one next. :) thanks for all the support!

Wow! Totally didn't expect that! Silly Brian! I can't wait to see what happens next! Update soon! btw thanx again! ;)

If Nick chases that hussey.... *huffs*

Good chapter hun. :)

Aww! I loved it. Perfect encounter and of course Nick had to be all flirty about it. Anyway, thank you for the offer! I would love for you to be a beta reader. I think I do need someone honest who will tell me if my writing sucks or has some potential. Let me know how I can contact you! I can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: That was really just a baby encounter. The party in the next chapter is where we start to see where this story is headed... now I just have to go write it. :) And I would never just say your writing sucks(duh)... but I would tell you what you could do to make it better. (if I can, I'm no professional you know) my email is atruecinderella@yahoo.com just let me know its you in the subject. Look forward to hearing from you!