ok something was off just now, it wouldnt let me read this chapter so i thought i was down to the last chap. luckily i rechecked again after reviewing! i still have a long way to go! lol...so anyway, ok the ending...you almost gave me a heartattack! i thought it was Elle who dropped by! lmao! but it's kevin, YAY!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Lol everyone gets excited when kevin pops in! I've read to many cliffhanger types to not try to do one myself (haha payback!!!)

awww it's so nice to know brian and the family met Nick at the airport, that's so sweet :) and im glad he told Brian abt Elle because Brian needs to get in the loop already!

Author's Response: *nods head enthusiastically* Yep that why I wanted them to do that, coz Baylee would've been all over Nick when he got to there house if they hadn't picked him up and he would'nt have had the chance to talk to him about it till later

lmao! funny! and aj getting all giddy because he gets to drive nick's sweet ride! i'd have read more but work stopped me from doing so. Now i'll have to wait to see what nick's wearing! or i might just take a peek on the next chapter before i leave, hehe.

Author's Response: LOL I really don't know why I wrote AJ like that, cause... well he can buy 1 himself! Go on have a peek, you know you wanna LOL

Wow okay…first of all I gotta admit I was kind of down when I see Aaron but you wrote him well. I mean, he’s not annoying and whiny or girly, lol…so I’m okay with him. But that’s just besides the point…before I go to the important though…gotta point these out:

1. I did a little dance because you mentioned Supernatural. And then I did more dance because I was trying to imagine Nick watching Supernatural and going ‘I like this Dean guy, he reminds me of someone I know…’ and then thought it’d be awesome if he’d get that car and show it off to AJ. OMG I hope in a new interview he’d mention Supernatural as his favorite tv show! lol


2. Nick buying Brian a necklace is so cute! I swear I was also flailing for all the F&F slash writer/readers out there cause you know, they so wish those two are secretly dating behind Leigh’s back! Hehe.


Okay now to the serious part. WTF!!! At first I was all God Moppy, when in the hell, during all those sex making that Nick didn’t have any recollection whatsoever (which must have suck for him to not remember how that went, lol) did he manage to give her his email address??? And then of course yeah, her email addy didn’t even exist! And what did Nick do? He went straight to NLY (yay for the shoutout!! That place rocks!) and amused himself over the chats there! Typical Nick! (also yeah, I had your icon in the back of my head as I was reading it, lmao!!)


And then as if stuck in a time loop…Nick found himself in the same situation he was in the night before. But of course Nick’s brain works on Backstreet time and couldn’t really tell or be bothered to acknowledge the creepiness of it all until it was too late and he was too swept away to give a damn. Ahhh Nick you’re gonna be the death of me I swear!


Author's Response: LOL thats kinda why Aaron's only in it for a little bit, otherwise he prolly would turn out abit girly! LMFAO, I was so reading Children Like Me when I wrote that chapter, thought have to put SN in there somewhere. Hmm, never thought of it that way. I wrote that because I was watching something with the guys and Brian had a simple cross necklace and thought if Nick gave him one it would be blinging LOL. Read more chapters and it should explain it, if it doesn't...well then I'll have to go back and explain *blushes* The whole sex thing thats another part thats gonna pop up later. *giggles hysterically* I had to put the siggy in there somewhere, though I expect nick's response alot different LOL Again the groundhog day thing will come up later!

moppy, im sorry it took me this long to start reading but better late than never yes? So here's my opinion on the first chappy...i seriously believe that you have all 5 guys' character down to a T (yeah, still not sure why it's a T). I like how Nick knows these guys inside and out, could just tell by the body language what was going on. Your Nick voice sounds just about right, I was totally sold. I like how when Nick was reminiscing, he wasnt sure if he was 16 or 17, it makes it more real than just saying 'i was 16' and gives off the impression that he has really good memories when you know, in real life, memories tend to go kind of hazy after a while...now im curious about why Nick is tempting suicide lately.

Author's Response: It's never too late to start reading, as you know I went back to read all your previously written stories! LOL yeah it could have been S! I just thought about what I've read in all BSB fan fiction I've read over the years and put together my opinion, since I've never seen them in real life...sob sob lol. Yeah thats exactly the way I was going, more real life elements mixed with fiction (obviously)that reminicsing part was actually written like how I would, coz I have the worst memory with some things. I am actually planning on explaining on the suicide thoughts later on, I don't know if anyone picked that up since i never mentioned it but your the 1st to mention it.

good job moppy! you're improving with every chapter and that's a great sign! anyways ur welcome honey! love ya and email me soon okie?

Teri

Author's Response: *fans self* Wow thanks heaps Teri, that says alot since I love your stories alot but then you know that from all my feedback from AC and NLY lol I ain't a stalker I swear *looks shifty*

Oooo something is gonna happen and I can feel it..lol
Great Update.
And no need to thank me. I am always there when someone or anyone needs an ear to listen to them. Glad your back :D

Author's Response: You can feel it?? LOL....sorry dirty mind I've got :P Thanks for reviewing, thanks for having me back lol