[Report This]Date: 02/18/07 04:15 am Title: Chapter 1
good beginning interesting
Author's Response: Thanks!!! HOpe you will read more
Author's Response: Thanks!!! HOpe you will read more
[Report This]Date: 02/17/07 03:26 pm Title: Chapter 4
Hmmm..not sure..but this story is interesting..I think after chapter one that the rest of the chapters set that chapter off..like the whole story line does not make sense..thats what I think though..it is good, you just need to keep with the same pace as you did with chapter one.
Author's Response: Really??? Hmm...ok I can understand your point of view and thanks for your honesty :) I'm hoping it will start to make sense as it goes along.
Could you tell me whats not making sense and maybe I could fix it??
[Report This]Date: 02/13/07 02:58 pm Title: Chapter 3
Oooo now this is really gonna get interesting..great update..still loving the story
Author's Response: LOL...wait until you read the next couple of chapters, gonna be a helluva lot more interesting (at least I hope lol)
[Report This]Date: 02/11/07 07:33 pm Title: Chapter 2
aww that's sad about his dog, but wow the man moves fast lol. Update soon
Author's Response: It is sad about Layla, my grandad had a dog that actually looks exactly like Nick's dog Layla and I love her to bits but she bit me and she had to be put down.
I'll probably update tonight or tomorrow :D
[Report This]Date: 02/11/07 08:39 am Title: Chapter 2
interesting chapter..Layla dies and then a girl kisses him..i like the chapter but wow.
Author's Response: Lol it's supposed to be more than kissing but I kinda smoothed over it (does that make sense?)
I've got most of the main ideas in my head but it's filling in the missing blanks thats taking it longer and the story might (hopefully not) start sucking!!
Wow huh?? lol
[Report This]Date: 02/10/07 07:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
sounds good so far. Update soon.
Author's Response: Cool thanks for the feedback.
I'm actually gonna be updating very soon so check back!!!
[Report This]Date: 02/10/07 06:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great job so far Moppy! You made me crack up w/ the whole Kevin and the tigers scene cuz i could SOOO picture that happening LOL I like so far how you let all the guys personalities shine through and I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: :O OMG....HI Mellz (waves frantically) lol wow one of my fave authors is reading my story!!! Whats that word you use in these situations...dammit I'm having a blank moment...Honour!!! Thats it wow this is an honour, thanks for the feedback.
Yeah I really like that scene, love writing funny stuff in my stories and hope I can pull of some more.
[Report This]Date: 02/10/07 09:54 am Title: Chapter 1
I like it...can't wait to see what happens...aww my Kev is gone...*tear* UPDATE!
Author's Response: Alot is gonna happen...oops said to much ;D lol.
Kev may not be gone, so dry those eyes and keep reading he may appear when you least expect it!!
[Report This]Date: 02/10/07 07:07 am Title: Chapter 1
Awww i like this story..Great job..do you tend to write more..cause I would love it if you do..
Author's Response: Wow!! My first feedback for this story!!
Thanks heaps and yeah I'm currently upto Chapter 9 but not sure when I'm gonna post more, maybe if I get more feedback on how I'm doing ;P
