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Reviewer: alota_cookin Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/05/08 03:34 am Title: Chapter 4

okay...to put it bluntly...I have to take this one slowly...I can't read too much at a time. It's really well written, thus the reason I'm having issues over here. Your detail to each person's emotions is great and i can really relate to each of them. I appreciate that you have put so much time into this story, making it true to life and how people handle these things. I'll read more soon!

Author's Response: Awww, Shaniqua! *hands you a tissue* I's sowwy I makin' you sad! Thanks for the wonderful compliments and feedback! [Ashley]

Reviewer: Sakabelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/08 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 4

That was such a sad chapter :( I hope that they are able to get ahold of Leighanne soon! And poor Baylee, he has no clue what's going on. You could really feel how scared and alone he felt in those first few paragraphs. Great job, Ashley!

Author's Response: I thought it would be appropriate to delve into Baylee's psyche a bit and express how he is reacting to everything. It may be happening to Brian but everyone around him is affected by it also, and I'm trying to show that. Thanks for the review! [Ashley]

Reviewer: rebellious_one Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/30/08 08:50 am Title: Chapter 4

Baylee is just adorable in this story, you did a damn good job writing him. I couldn't help than to smile when Brian attempted to be humorous in his state. I was beginning to wonder where the hell Leighanne is for all of this, but I assume she'll come in when I continue reading. I feel really bad for Brian... especially for his mother, having to sit there and listen to her son talk as if his ailment was nothing but the flu, when in actuality he's dying. I hope they find a heart for him.



Author's Response: Yeah, trust that Leighanne will make an appearance soon. Thanks for the review. [Ashley]

Reviewer: Luci Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/28/07 07:18 am Title: Chapter 4

awww... loving it so far

Author's Response: Thanks for the review lil' sis. Glad you are loving it so far! [Ashley]

Reviewer: Veronica Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/03/07 07:42 am Title: Chapter 4

Soo sad.. even more when she was talking about Brian when he was a little boy... Hey did you get the sunglasses idea from Big Daddy. lol I can't wait to read what's gonna happen next. Sorry for the delay on the review.

Author's Response: Come to think of it, I think I might of gotten the sunglasses idea from Big Daddy without even realizing it. Thanks for the review. Chapter 5 is almost finished and should be posted soon! Keep checking back! [Ashley]

Reviewer: sweet18_2003 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/01/07 12:04 am Title: Chapter 4

Wow...what an emotional chapter. It couldnt have turned out better. Completely amazing, Ash! Baylee is just too adorable for words but I feel so bad for Harold and Jackie. Please update soon...I love this story!

Author's Response: Well, hot damn! Where you been at?! I was beginning to wonder if I would receive a review from you for this chapter 'cause I ain't seen you online in a while! Thanks for the review though! I'm glad I got my advisor's approval for this chapter for how it was written! Chapter 5 is already in the works, so I'm hoping to have it finished in the next few days. Maybe by Wednesday! [Ashley]

Reviewer: Lynn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/31/07 07:59 am Title: Chapter 4

Wow. This...whole chapter---it's so somber.

Just so sad.

Author's Response: Like I've said before, I'm a drama queen when it comes to my writing. It just seems to work for me! Thanks for the review girl! I'll let you know when I update again! [Ashley]

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/31/07 04:39 am Title: Chapter 4

Nooooooo!!! SOMEBODY DONATE HIM A HEART!!!!!!!!!!! NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!

UPDATE!!!!

~Lenni~

P.S. Baylee's cute! Hehe.

Author's Response: You are a riot Lenni! And of course Baylee is cute! Just look at pictures of him! Check back for updates! I should have the next chapter up within the next few days! [Ashley]