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Reviewer: rebellious_one Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/02/08 02:08 pm Title: Chapter 7

Ugh... was that an MRI Brian had to go through?! I hate MRI's, lol. And poor Isabella. =[ I enjoyed the small bits of humor you added within this chapter, with Brian being his slightly silly self, and his mother by his side, lightly scolding him for his antics, lol. And Brian losing hope and faith is just heartbreaking... the words he says is not him at all, but I think I would have the same "I don't care" attitude if I was in his position honestly... I can't imagine how much physical, mental and emotional pain a person endures when they're told that their days are limited. =[



Author's Response: I had a dream many months ago that I was pretty much thrust into my story and put in Brian's position. Honestly, there really are no words that can truly describe the feelings and emotions I experienced, but I've sorta fed off of that and incorporated them into Brian's actions. And there should always be a little humor mixed in with the drama. It makes it easier to deal with that way. Thanks for the review! [Ashley]

Reviewer: sweet18_2003 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/02/07 08:29 pm Title: Chapter 7

I feel bad for Brian...poor thing. He's definitely bitter...not that I blame him. Leigh better get her ass there soon. Screw bad weather...thats no excuse. Her husband needs her!!! And Izzy is so cute and sweet...hope she ends up being ok!

Author's Response: Izzy's character was just a short random cameo spot. She doesn't make another appearance. I was just using her as a filler scene in the chap. Glad you are liking it so far advisor! [Ashley]

Reviewer: luci Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/28/07 07:39 am Title: Chapter 7

thumbs up

Author's Response: Tankies! You are really making my day! [Ashley]

Reviewer: Nikki P Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/29/07 08:33 pm Title: Chapter 7

This is a really good story, sad but really good. I think Brian and Isabella can end up helping esch other in the hospital...

Update soon PLEASE!

Author's Response: Glad your are enjoying the story so far! I already have chapter 8 started, so check back for an update! Thanks for the review! [Ashley]

Reviewer: felikia2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/29/07 07:12 pm Title: Chapter 7

of COURSE i love the chapters.....i just dotn like a dying brian is all...:(

Author's Response: Well darn, I don't like a dying Brian either, but it really makes for some good tear jerking drama! Thanks for the review! Glad you liked the chap! Check back for an update because I've already began chapter 8! [Ashley]

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/29/07 04:01 am Title: Chapter 7

Whose Isabella's mother??? Lol.

"Look Mommy...I can walk..." Brian cackled quietly. - LOVED this!!!!! ROFLMAO!!!! *sings* "Mommy, Wow! I'm a big kid now!" Lol.

I liked this chapter, but still feel so horribly awful for Brian! My poor B-rokster!!!! *hugs him carefully* Get well, please!

UPDATE!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~

Author's Response: Honestly, I don't know who Isabella's mother is. But I created Isabella in honor of you. I was gonna name her Lenni, but, I thought the name Isabella fitted her character better. So that was your surprise. Thank you for the review and I'm glad you enjoyed the chap. Check back for a review! Chapter 8 has already been started! [Ashley]