Date: 07/10/08 12:09 pm Title: Chapter 14
Oh.my.God. This chapter was incredible. So sad...heartbreaking. You did an amazing job conveying Brian's fears.
Author's Response: I figured with everything that was going on, delving directly into how Brian was feeling would certainly do the story justice. I think it was a very vital move and it worked perfectly. Thanks for the review hon! [Ashley]
Date: 05/02/08 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 14
Wow... this chapter was really heartwrenching. I can't imagine a person living with the pain and suffering Brian is going through; it's seriously making me wince reading the pain and suffering Brian is enduring. It's not too late for him to go to the cardiac center... I hope he does something to change all of this, it's not too late.
Author's Response: Brian sees it in a completely different way, that all hope has already been lost. Not that I blame him for wanting to stay with his family for whatever little bit of time he has left. That would be really important to me if I was in that kinda situation. [Ashley]
Date: 11/11/07 08:19 pm Title: Chapter 14
Wow...Brian sure did make a mess! Sorry, didnt mean to make humor out of a bad situation. I would have done the same thing in that situation. Hopefully Leigh can help him get through this and that he didnt scare Baylee too badly.
Author's Response: Ok, so I have yet ANOTHER confession to make. Like I said in my response to the previous chapter's review, this chapter is a revised version of a chapter for one of my other fics that I started a couple years ago but then trashed (December Snow). Man, am I terrible or what? At least I am plagerizing my own work. Haha. I'm just kidding. But like I said for the previous review, the content in the chapter fit perfectly for the situation that was going on so I decided to use what I had on file. I think it worked out good. Tankies for the review Ashie! [Ashley]
Date: 10/24/07 03:38 am Title: Chapter 14
I can't wait to read the next chapter...hopefully something goes good for them
Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review! I really appreciate the feedback. However, there won't be any sneak peeks into what's going to happen from me. LoL. What would be the fun in knowing before hand? Check back for an update soon! [Ashley]
Date: 10/21/07 06:57 am Title: Chapter 14
Oye vey. You had me crying at paragraph three! *blniks back tears like crazy* Why the Hell aren't they rushing a heart tom him immediately!?!?!?!?! If he's THAT fragile, they should've found him a new heart, like, YESTERDAY, dammit!!!!!!!!!!!
They'd BETTER save him or I'M gonna be kickn' some major ass here! NO matter what ANYone says!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: Oh Lenni, I don't think I will ever get tired of seeing reviews from you. Hmmm, maybe I should find some way to give you a cameo sometime later in the story. Thanks for the feedback girl! I really appreciate it! [Ashley]
