Date: 05/02/08 10:24 pm Title: Chapter 16
How ironic, I'm reading this story and listening to my radio at the same time, and low and behold, "Show Me The Meaning Of Being Lonely" comes on... of all songs!! Lol. I frowned at the beginning part of them two fighting in the car, but glad that everything turned out okay for them in the end, it was good to read them joking around with each other once again. Nicky boy... why the hell are you interested in someone else's sex life, better yet, why are you interested in your best friend's sex life?! Lol. I liked the little scene of Nick screaming obscenities over the football game, how typical and very realistic. And man... when Brian wasn't feeling well that moment and decided to stalk off to the bathroom, I wish Nick followed him.
Author's Response: Secret revealed: This chapter was partly based on the first football game I ever went to (Seahawks[my home team] vs. Chiefs [:P]). We had amazing seats so that's where that part came from. Ok, so that's pretty much all the real life truth there was in that chap, but it made it easier to write it since I had the visual of the surroundings in my head. I think the outting did Brian and Nick some good, even though they never got to finish the game because the outting kinda ended on a bad note with Brian getting sick. As always thanks for the review! [Ashley]
Date: 11/11/07 10:03 pm Title: Chapter 16
n the beginning, Nick and B were bickering like a couple of teenage girls....lol. But God....Bri forgot his meds....he should really let Nick take him to the hospital. Now I am caught up and you must update because I want to read more!!! I wanna know what happens!!!
Author's Response: *roflmao (<----- And this is bad because I am at work right now)* Brian and Nick bickering like a couple of teenage girls? That's freakin hilarious! Brian and Nick are too much alike. They are both way too stubborn which only tends to create more conflict in their relationship, but I think I finally mended that problem some what. They didn't want to do it, but I finally sat them down one day and said they would just have to deal with it. I told them it was time to kiss and make up. Unfortunately, Nick took my metaphoric example seriously and when he puckered his lips, Brian fainted. Now Brian is mad at me because he says I tried to make Nick kiss him. Damn stubborn story characters. *shakes head* Once again, tankies for the review Ashie! [Ashley]
Date: 11/03/07 06:22 am Title: Chapter 16
Oye vey. DAMMIT BRIAN!!!!!!!!!!!!! Something could be more wrong than you jsut forgettting your medication!!!!!!!! *curses wildly* LET HIM BE ALRIGHT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: Well yeah, something could be more wrong then the lack of medication. But what about the fact that him and Nick finally made up? LoL. I mean, they were kinda acting like children... Thanks for the review Lenni! [Ashley]
Date: 11/02/07 05:47 pm Title: Chapter 16
poor brian!!!!
Author's Response: Wow, that's exactly what I said! Thanks for the review! [Ashley]
