Date: 03/24/07 08:34 am Title: Chapter 3
That evil, little, coniving BITCH!!!!
It's getting really interesting, waiting to find out when the bitch strikes next.
Can't wait for the next chapter Update soon please!!!
Date: 03/24/07 04:46 am Title: Chapter 3
Wow... Nick has really let him self get into a deadly situation and the guys don't see it. They just shrug it off as Nick being... Nick. I'd like to see their reactions when they realize what really goes on behind closed doors. Unfortunately, there are a lot of women like Melanie in the world and it makes me sick to my stomach. This story is amazing. Keep up the great work, CT.
Date: 03/24/07 03:22 am Title: Chapter 3
WOW. that's all I can say....wow.
Date: 03/24/07 01:39 am Title: Chapter 3
owo this is a great story. keep up the great work i can't wait for the next update almost wanted to hurt her.
Date: 03/23/07 10:25 pm Title: Chapter 3
i wish nick would just tell the guys whats going on!
Date: 03/23/07 10:01 pm Title: Chapter 3
Just started to read your story they good x up date soon
Date: 03/19/07 02:31 am Title: Chapter 2
Interesting so far... I'll admit at first I was like OMG...Please, not ANOTHER "Nick gets raped" kind of stories. But I can see that this is going in a different kind of direction. I was wondering why Roxanne seemed so eager to give Nick her number. Although something tells me Melanie is going to find her card on Nick and it won't be pretty!
Date: 03/19/07 02:29 am Title: Chapter 2
ooo...this is good...tho i gotta tell ya, when i read the first chapter i thought this was about nick and mandy.
Date: 03/18/07 02:12 pm Title: Chapter 2
Hmm seems she has a past with someone abusive??
Great update can't wait to read the next one!
Date: 03/18/07 05:32 am Title: Chapter 2
Ooooh. Very interesting. And as IF that - that - THING - beat the crap out of Nicky!!!!!!!! *angry look* She'd better watch it, or I'll come after HER with a baseball bat to defend my Nicky!!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Date: 03/18/07 05:11 am Title: Chapter 2
Awe man, Plumsie, this is just such an awesome story, I wish you knew how wonderful it is. Poor Nick just makes my heart clench with pain, and the way that little whore in girlfriend's clothing has him trained is just despicable. It was touching that his Dad called, I was cooing over that. And even though I already know who was calling Roxie, I love how you ended the chapter on a mysterious note. Very well done.
Date: 03/18/07 04:23 am Title: Chapter 2
Brilliant chapter. You just feel so bad for Nick, who feels that he's weak because a woman beat him. You want to bring him into your arms and tell him it's not his fault and he's not the only man who's been abused. Yeah... you can tell I'm addicted to this fic already. It's going somewhere no one has really gone before and I'm proud of you! Keep going, you're doing great.
Date: 03/14/07 02:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow. Amazing start. I've always loved your stories though. Sorry I've been missing lately...but happened to come on here and saw your story and just had to read! So much emotion and damn, I hurt now just reading what happened to Nick. *winces* Poor guy...hopefully he takes up that offer from Roxie! Update soon
Date: 03/14/07 06:15 am Title: Chapter 1
Holy... that was amazing. So emotional. Like you're right there watching it and there's nothing you can do to stop it. And you're right, more men are abused than people think. My dad was... it's a reality many people are just seeing now. I've said it before, you're a phenominal writer. You did beautiful and I hope you write more soon.
Date: 03/14/07 02:38 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow. Just... Wow. That's all I can coherently think at this point, to be honest. It's just so wonderfully written, so heart-wrenching, and as perfect as I knew it would be when you first told me the idea. :)