Date: 04/10/10 05:08 pm Title: Chapter 63
I'm rereading Rebs-because I miss your writing! haha. Just want to say that this is a great chapter. I love how it was set up.
Date: 11/30/07 07:11 am Title: Chapter 63
omg! i just re-read this chapter while listening to the song. major tear jerker! i'm crying. guess this makes us both weirdos. lol.
Author's Response: LOL. That song inspired it... even though the chapter had nothing to do with a car accident, lol.
[Report This]Date: 05/07/07 02:00 pm Title: Chapter 64
*eyes bulge* dude helluva cliffhanger!!!
Best part though... I can start reading the sequel!!!
[Report This]Date: 03/30/07 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 64
You can't let Nick and AJ die!!!! Nooooo! Girl, I got a little misty eyed over here... lol I can't wait to read the sequel... I hope it comes out soon... I loooove this story. And about the rest of your stories, I think it's best to go little by little cause than people will get confused on what's going on.. but I can't wait to read them.
Author's Response: Thank you for helping me decide, I had a feeling that people would get confused. But besides "Whatever It Takes", the sequel to this story is coming out. Like I said I started on it already and I'm gonna take this story chapter by chapter, I'm not just gonna throw it all up there like "Incomplete" and "Whatever It Takes", it'll put you readers at ease!! =P The sequel is entitled "Empty Spaces" and I hope you guys enjoy it just as much as "Incomplete". Thank you for all of your reviews Veronica, keep them coming girl!! It's people like you that keep me writing!! =)
[Report This]Date: 03/30/07 02:09 pm Title: Chapter 64
oh get the hell out of here. damn cliffhanger. I hope u have a sequel please please!!!!!!!!!! I loved this story (sighs) love it
Author's Response: Lol. I'm sorry. I think the ending was really corny, but I didn't mean to leave you with a cliffhanger. Lol. But yess, the sequel is on it's way so not to worry!! =) Thanks for your reviews and I am really glad that you loved my story!! Thank you!! =)
[Report This]Date: 03/30/07 03:28 am Title: Chapter 62
oh my god!!!!! cliff hanger please update soon love it
Author's Response: Update coming soon!! I promise!! Look out for sequel!! Thanks for the review!! =)
[Report This]Date: 03/29/07 07:16 pm Title: Chapter 62
With what you just said, something just clicked... and now my brain is working into overdrive... lol I mean seriously it's doing it right now... I also see that you have another story and just by reading the summary I know that I'm gonna read it soon.. I have to leave right now so I don't have the time... I know from this story it's probably gonna be great.
Author's Response: Something clicked with what I said?!? Lol. Forgive, I'm so late right now. Lol. But um, yah... I hope the second story turns out to be good!! I'm glad that you're enjoying it so far. There's sooo much more stories I want to post, but it's gonna be weird if I post it all at one time, dontcha think?!? Lol. But thanks for your reviews!! =)
[Report This]Date: 03/27/07 09:04 am Title: Chapter 62
Shit. I was getting so into that you just can't leave it there... I just spent the last three days reading this story and I just LOOOOVED it but I do have to say this.. not only did you killed Aaron off in this story but I can't believe you severed him in half... I like literally cringed at that part.. That's awesome that you're coming here from Vaffel, I used to go there but the site has been giving me problems.. hope you like it here and I can't wait to see how everything in this story's gonna go.
Author's Response: Lol. A lot of people were sad with the whole Aaron thing. I can't say much without giving it away, lemme tell you two things that I've been telling Moppy... sequel... twists... that's what it's all about!! Thanks for the review though, and I hope you enjoy the rest!! =)
[Report This]Date: 03/26/07 03:48 pm Title: Chapter 62
Dude serious drama happening, but I love it!!! lol
great story can't wait to find out what happens next
Author's Response: Lol. Why thank you!! Like I said before, the sequel's in the making and I'm throwing in all these twists that'll hopefully leave you shocked. Thanks for all your reviews though, because of you I'm gonna post another story. Lol. It's called "Whatever It Takes" so I hope you read it and like it. =)
[Report This]Date: 03/25/07 03:48 pm Title: Chapter 30
WOW!!! I read the first chapter awhile ago and now have caught up with whats happened so far.
It's a great story so far, sad about Aaron dying, especially being ripped in two.
Update soon please :D
Author's Response: I feel as if I'm throwing people off with the MAJOR chapter updates, but I already had this story posted at Vaffel and I'm not sure how much people visited Vaffel to read the stories, but I'm basically transferring my stories, so yah. I'm almost complete with the story and I'm already working on the sequel and I can't wait to get that out. A lot of people were depressed because of Aaron's death... =} <-- That's my crooked smile, lol. I'm just hoping that the sequel will leave you guys shocked, in a good way! =)
[Report This]Date: 03/24/07 04:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow... Well thats quite a dramatic start! I'd love to read more to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I hope you're enjoying it so far, please lemme know if I disappoint you in any way! =)
[Report This]Date: 03/24/07 10:46 am Title: Chapter 1
Damn whoever's crashing into them must have a big car or truck to make the bus swerve!
Very interesting can't wait for the next chapter
Update SOON!
Author's Response: Lol. I didn't even think about explaining what kind of car/truck was trying to run them off the road, but at least you got the main idea! =)
