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Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/07/09 01:34 pm Title: Torn Apart

Oh my fucking god!! What an asshole! Poor Anita has the worst luck with everything.

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Date: 01/07/09 01:18 pm Title: New Start

Awww poor Nick and Anita, if only he knew the truth about her.

Glad she found a job, even if the pay is crap.

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Date: 01/07/09 01:00 pm Title: She knows

Oh my god, this isn't looking good for Anita. *bites nails*

Reviewer: angelhunalex Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/07/09 12:09 am Title: Love me

awwwwwww so sweet. but... she has to tell him as soon as possible. i have a bad feeling :(

Author's Response:

Oh and your feelings are right on the dot girl. Trouble is ahead. Thank you.

Reviewer: angelhunalex Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/07/09 12:03 am Title: Emotions

damn can't believe that aj is such an asshole :(

Author's Response:

Yeah he sure is in this one, for a long while too. Thank you.

Reviewer: angelhunalex Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/06/09 11:56 pm Title: First kiss

damn... cute what nick told her and so cute that they kissed. but she should have told him. it even gets harder if she is lying to him now. and aj is an asshole!

Author's Response: Yeah, she is just so paranoid about his reaction that she loses all the nerves to tell him. Hell I would be scared to do it too. Thank you.

Reviewer: angelhunalex Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/06/09 11:48 pm Title: Long Day

and that makes it a lot more complicate, that she starts to like him.

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Date: 01/06/09 11:43 pm Title: Splashing Fun

really cute chapter. so cute to see the two of them together.

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Date: 01/06/09 11:29 pm Title: Comfortable

great chapter. and so not fait to anita.

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Date: 01/06/09 11:22 pm Title: Paid Hoe

i think the plan is kinda riskfull but this is getting very exciting.

Author's Response: they are such morons. Thank you.

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Date: 01/06/09 11:16 pm Title: Dance Baby!

whow, i didn't expect her to dance but seems like she did a great job.

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Date: 01/06/09 11:10 pm Title: Nervous feeling

oh ohhhhh i can understand that she doesn't want to do that.

Reviewer: angelhunalex Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/06/09 10:55 pm Title: Betrayed

damn shit. what a bitch!
and what is aj's plan now? could be interesting ;)

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/06/09 09:12 pm Title: Game On

Yay an update yay. Amazing chapter I loved it. I can't wait for more.

Author's Response:

Awesome I'm so glad that you loved it. More coming very soon. Thank you girl.

Reviewer: brandy_d Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/06/09 07:26 pm Title: Game On

YAY!!!! You took it off Hiatus! I am so excited. Poor Anita, I felt so bad for her in the last chapter when Nick had her pin against the wall treating her like a hoe, but I am glad that he seems to be coming around.

Update soon Erika! Great job, as always!



Author's Response: I did, I'm suddenly getting some ideas for this one, so hopefully I can crank them out. Yeah, he was being an ass, I guess he's trying to contain himself lately. Thank you sooo much Brandy.