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Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/08/07 01:56 am Title: And I don't know if I'd be here.

Yay the kid can go home for a while!

 UPDATE!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~ 



Author's Response: Hehe, I'm glad she can too.  It's not fun to be stuck in a hospital for months on end.  Thank you for the review!!  The next chapter should be out *hopefully* tonight, if not, then definitely tomorrow =]

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/07/07 07:03 pm Title: And I don't know if I'd be here.

awwwww she gets to go home yay. great chapter cant wait for more.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review!!  I'm hoping to get the next chapter out tomorrow.

Reviewer: nicklvr Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/04/07 03:44 am Title: About the things that we've been through

damn..thatwas great..updatethis is forthis chapter an thelast been away for few days couldn't check it..bt damn update soon!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!  I'm glad you're enjoying it!!

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/02/07 09:15 pm Title: About the things that we've been through

Lil' short, but still good - lol. I'd call that fast sex - haha.

UPDATE!!!!!!

~Lenni~ 



Author's Response: Yeah, sorry about the length =/  I've been struggling with some of my classes so it's tough to update and update a lot...but I'm going to try to get better because I'm missing writing, haha.  Plus, sometimes I struggle with the sex scenes.  I'm actually thinking about looking for someone to help me with those...anyone interested?  lol.  Thanks for the review!!

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/02/07 08:25 pm Title: About the things that we've been through

yay they are going to try again that was a really goood chapter cant wiat for more.

Author's Response: Thanks a bunch!!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/01/07 03:34 pm Title: Lately I've been thinkin'

Awesome story, cant wait for an update...

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/28/07 05:48 am Title: Lately I've been thinkin'

oh my that was such a good chapter, i cant wait to see what happeneds between them.

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/28/07 05:09 am Title: Lately I've been thinkin'

They're a crazy couple - lol. Yanno what I mean? Just - they're finding good in a bad situation & forgetting about the situation for a while & aren't afraid to do what they hafta to make the situation easier on everyone. I hope I made sense-lol.

UPDATE!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~ 

Reviewer: nick lvr Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/26/07 02:15 am Title: One man can claim

that wwas great gettin better gettin great...love this ...update soon

Reviewer: Jamanda Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/25/07 10:55 pm Title: One man can claim

Awe, I hate to see them in so much pain from Lanie. I hate knowing that Lanie is suffering. I hope she'll get better. I think Nick handled the photographers really well. I was so pleased that they backed off too. Hmm, Nick offered her to move in! I wonder what she'll say. :]

Please write more of this soon. It's great.

Reviewer: Nikki P Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/25/07 04:15 pm Title: One man can claim

Do it Shelly! Move in with him, go on you can do it. lol Great update

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/25/07 07:06 am Title: One man can claim

I bet she won't wanna move in! She prolly won't w anna burden him or anything-lol.

 Poor kid. I still feel so horible for her.

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~ 

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/25/07 03:15 am Title: One man can claim

Oh my, loved the chapter. i think she should move in with him.

Author's Response: Hehe, I'm glad you loved it!!  We'll seeee =]  Thank you for reviewing!!

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/24/07 02:39 am Title: I've got all the riches, baby

I think right now it'd seem best as just a long novel. I'm really enjoying it. That kid BETTER get better!

 UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!

 ~Lenni~



Author's Response: Thank you!!  I'm glad you're enjoying it =]  Guess we'll have to wait and see!!  The next chapter is up =]

Reviewer: Nikki P Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/23/07 07:54 pm Title: I've got all the riches, baby

I'd go with a long story because I don't really know where you could stop and then begin a sequal from here. I love the update, and no matter what you decide I'll keep reading :-)



Author's Response: Very, very true.  This is probably a really dumb reason, but so far for all the chapters I've been using a lyric from the song 'My Girl' and I'm about out of lyrics, lol.  But I think I know what I'm going to do after all the lyrics are up...so I'm going to continue to make it a long story.  Thank you so much for reading =]  I really appreciate it!!