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Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/04/07 09:16 pm Title: At the Bank of the Sanzu

The story is really good though! Despite the name confusion - you did make me cry after all! I didn't even realize it at first, but then I was like, "Ah! Dammit!" Lol. I always curse when I cry - haha. But the story was wonderful.

~Lenni~

Author's Response: Thank you. You could... See my sadness... Couldn't you?

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/04/07 04:20 am Title: At the Bank of the Sanzu

Ah, hell! *wipes eyes* You made me cry! I liked it - even if I mixed people up a little - lol. But, that's just me - hehe.

*thumbs up*

~Lenni~

Author's Response: I'm sorry.... :( 'Kay.. Almost everyone has been confused with names... I think I'll explain honorifics for a page before I start the story... I'd take them out... But Damon mentions them.... :(

Reviewer: Mare Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/04/07 03:25 am Title: At the Bank of the Sanzu

Aww that was very well written Dee. I especially loved your first paragraph, it set up the story really well. and hehehe you said loins! :OP

I was a little confused at times but again I just think it's the whole anime-ish type style, that's what it felt like to me, like I was reading or watching one of those anime cartoons. The names, for me when names are that intricate it's hard to keep up with the who is who but that's me lol The story as a whole was great. I think you'll do very well.

Author's Response: Thanks. :) Well... It seemed to fit. Haha. :D It's from the manga I created. :) So yes, it's in that style. It's honorifics... But I can understand how it could be confusing for someone without the background. *nod* I was considering changing it, but I've been working on this for like five years, so they wrote themselves that way.... *sigh* Thank you. :)

Reviewer: DragonStar Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/04/07 01:01 am Title: At the Bank of the Sanzu

I really liked it. I hope you get an A on it!

Author's Response: Thanks hun. :)