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Reviewer: No_Angel Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/14/10 02:16 pm Title: Chapter 1

wow.... just... wow... i have no words... damn good story....

Reviewer: Negris Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/08 07:23 am Title: Chapter 1

this was so beautiful, nice twist

Reviewer: shrinkingviolet Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/13/07 01:21 am Title: Chapter 1

OMG this had me in tears, especially this part:

Seeing how happy they are, I know they are going to be alright.

So bittersweet, really. And I had to smile when I saw the woman's name was Katie (that's my daughter's name). Very good job. :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! :D This review made me very happy!

Reviewer: Gal1015 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/28/07 09:58 am Title: Chapter 1

Awwwww.... that really caught me man! i'm sobbishish now and yesh, kids pls don't use that word in your compo, lol... awesome story!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! :D

Reviewer: Nikki P Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/11/07 06:59 am Title: Chapter 1

Awww that's cute and so sad at the smae time!


Author's Response: Thanks Nikki!

Reviewer: Maggie Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/08/07 03:19 am Title: Chapter 1

Awww! That is so sweet. I hope I can do something for this challenge too.

Author's Response: Thank you.. So, did you? (If so and I read it, I'm sorry for not recognizing you lol)

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/06/07 04:27 am Title: Chapter 1

Aww. That's such a sweet story - sad, but sweet. Bittersweet really. *soft smile* I enjoyed it. Great fic!

~Lenni~

Author's Response: Thanks Lenni! :D

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/05/07 08:23 pm Title: Chapter 1

aah that was sad but great!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: mersey Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/05/07 08:14 am Title: Chapter 1

this is such a lovely fest! sad but lovely. I actually teared up at this:


I know Brian too felt my presence sometimes. He’d sit on our bed and call out my name. And when I sat down next to him, he looked my way. As his eyes filled with tears he said he couldn’t do this. That he couldn’t raise Baylee on his own, or just get through each day without me. It was heartbreaking to watch and not being able to comfort him made things even worse. But I couldn’t leave. I couldn’t just leave him there, all by himself. Not until I knew he was going to be alright.



that was lovely. and i love how each of the guys play a part in Baylee's life and were there for Brian. I love how Leigh said goodbye only after knowing Brian would be alright. *sigh* Lovely!

Author's Response: *hands box of tissues* And yay for the fact that you read it! I love the way you always review! Thanks so much!

Reviewer: kevmylove Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/05/07 06:54 am Title: Chapter 1

Oh shit! Sorry for the words...but that was a great story...I was confused at first thinking that they had split and that she was there cause they were still friends and when I finally caught your concept that is great thinking...I loved it girl...You did GREAT!!!

Author's Response: Thank you SO much! And I meant for the readers to be confused at first, so yay!! ;)

Reviewer: Mare Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/05/07 12:19 am Title: Chapter 1

awww that was a very excellent story. What a great plot twist, to make her dead and watching Brian progess without her there. And to me that was kind of romance because she loved him and it was told in her point of view so those to me are two traits of a romance.

My favorite part was this: Then he kissed me. And his kiss told me I worried for nothing. He was as happy as a child in a candy store, standing inside a toy store, standing in the middle of an amusement park.

What a great description of how Brian was feeling about becoming a daddy.

:O) Well done!

Author's Response: Yay, Mare thinks it is kinda a romance story.. ;D Thanks so much Mare for taking the time to both read and review! And as for the toy store-candy store-amusement park-part. I kinda didn't know how to describe the way he could have felt right then and there.. So I just thought about the 'as happy as a kid in a candy store'-phrase and all of a sudden, this came rolling out :D So I'm very pleased with that part as well. Thanks again for reading!