Reviewer: AngelgirlD Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/30/07 12:51 am Title: Chapter 4

This is a sad chapter, but good but I still can't believe Kevin gone and leave everyone behind...while I was reading this chapter I felt lost, sad and almost about to cry, gurl you know how to make a girl cry.  Good Brian is back maybe they can reunite eventhough the actual encounter was a bit sour for all counts. Also I'm glad that Kevin didn't kill himself, the poor guy just wanted to return to his happy and memorable place but he was so drunk that he didn't see anything else.  I cannot wait to keep reading.

Author's Response: awww, you're back, yay! (And you have no idea what's ahead of you.) lol this has to be the craziest story I've ever written. Quite the emotional roller coaster, so brace yourself and have fun! As always, love hearing from you! Your comments mean a lot! Thanks hun!

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/27/07 07:56 pm Title: Chapter 4

Aww. That's so sad. And I knew where he was headed before they did! Soon as they said Route 40 I was like, "Mercy! He was headed for Mercy!"

My poor, poor Kevin.....*wails*.....And Brian is such an ass - even if he was sweet in my dream this morning - lol.

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~

Author's Response: lol. I wish he was sweet and charming in my dream. Not that he was mean, he just wasn't in my dream. But Brian's character still has a lot more development to go through. Nice one on thinking Mercy though! That plays a big part in this story.