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Reviewer: AngelgirlD Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/29/07 07:30 pm Title: Chapter 7

Now, what happen with Brian and AJ??? It seem everyone fought with everyone before they left and now they are holding grudges.

"The rich olive complexion suddenly made the Puerto Rican traits of the boy clear as day and..." What is this Puerto Rican huh? Howie noooooooo! God that would be a killer twist to this meyham lol! but darn i thought i would get Howie not leighanne I thought Leighanne was for Brian...This is a typo isn't it?  If not when did this happen god caused the only one that I notice to be with her was Brian and I know I didn;t keep up with the story but I'm behind not blind and I read perfectly Gosh this so exciting lol! Its wicked it Loving it.

What the heck what a emotional and revealing scence whoa! I loved it how baylee and Howie saw each other and froze and then Leighanne go and faint that was great i cannot wait to read more so let me stop this rambling and continue... lol! Great !

 



Author's Response: hahaha no, that wasn't a typo! I knew everyone would expect a baby, but I knew no one would ever think it was Howie's hehe. Yes, very exciting stuff going on. Glad you're having a great time with it!

Reviewer: kevmylove Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/05/07 02:11 am Title: Chapter 7

Once again OH MY GOD!!! This story has my stomach in knots its so different from all the regular bsb stories...I love it...I'm in love...and I actually like Kristen....I can't wait to read more...so three words for you "Please update soon"

Reviewer: kevmylove Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/05/07 02:11 am Title: Chapter 7

Once again OH MY GOD!!! This story has my stomach in knots its so different from all the regular bsb stories...I love it...I'm in love...and I actually like Kristen....I can't wait to read more...so three words for you "Please update soon"

Author's Response: Aww thank you. I was worried that you would just be too sad because I killed Kevin. I'm glad you like it. I think it's so different from normal BSB stories too. I think I've discovered a love for AU stories for that very reason. Thanks for reading! More to come, oh so much more to come!

Reviewer: Nijntje Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/07 11:17 am Title: Chapter 7

Well, I kinda froze as well lol. That was quite a shocker, Honey..

Author's Response: um, yeah, sorry about that. This story's kind of full of that. ;)

Reviewer: starbeamz2 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/30/07 09:55 pm Title: Chapter 7

damn you, kelly. you throw all kinds of wrenches and twists into this story, and just make it all the more intriguing! if you don't update again in the next day and a half, i might just die LOL no, seriously, you're doing a fabulous job, and i can't wait to see where this roller coaster keeps going! i'm still SHOCKED at the whole Leighanne and Howie being Baylee's parents deal, but it was GENIUS. WRITE ON, WOMAN!

Author's Response: hehehe... never assume anything! I never said the kid was Brian's lol. But I knew everyone would think that. hahahahaha!!! You should have seen me smirking to myself as I posted this chapter. (I amuse myself sometimes.) I'm glad you like the twist. But now that everyone has been reunited, all of these intriguing plot lines will have to be explored and "dealt with" and then somehow (God willing) tie together to make one complete story. I see it working in my mind, but can I translate that to paper??? We shall see... I took on quite an ambitious project with this story. I still have a few tricks up my sleeve too, that I'm saving for when people start finding out the truth behind it all. Yep, the drama's like the energizer bunny in this story...

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