Date: 10/29/07 11:06 pm Title: Chapter 13
AJ was right to talk to Leighanne like that is is selfsih everyone has problems everyones has skeleton in their closet but everyone came to gether for one reason and she is really the only that hasn't really even aski Kristin how she feel she all rap up in her dilemma that fort the real purpose that she came back. And I thinks thats what she need it. Plus she hasn't really taken care of Baylee that AJ also mentioned to her. I guess she need to be shaken a bit and I think AJ maneges that.
Author's Response: Good I'm glad you liked that. I knew someone was going to have to do that and at first I thought Nick but after I got into writing it, I realized that AJ had to be the one to call her on it.
Date: 10/15/07 04:23 pm Title: Chapter 13
This story is so crazy! I love it though. These people need like group counciling or something. I thought my friends were complicated, geeze. I still wanna know what Aj wrote in his book, I am beyond curious. Its funny how you can feel bad for all these characters and be really angry at them at the same time. You have done a great job with this story. Can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response: Crazy in a good way or crazy in a soap opera way? This is the most drama I've ever put into one story. And LMAO at group counseling. That's sort of what this trip was supposed to be for them. Hopefully you'll feel that way by the end. They all just need to talk to one another and work it out, but when and if they can is another story. I'll start working on the next chapter tonight, so hopefully it won't take too long. The next couple should be really exciting. (I hope.) And I'm really excited that you are feeling sorry for them and angry at them. (well I'm thrilled that you are feeling anything for them in the first place) but I was really trying to create some complicated characters that you could love and hate all at once. I think that's how people are in real life. They make mistakes, but even if it is their fault, there should be room for forgiveness because in a way, they're all just doing the best they can.
Date: 10/15/07 09:45 am Title: Chapter 13
um...whoa. that was yet another intense chapter, and, of course, i LOVED it! Bri-Leigh kissed! But then she tried to seduce AJ?! Weird, but I can see how it could happen! I'm pretty excited about the next chapter, so write on!
As for our story, I've been at home, sharing a computer with my two brothers and my dad, so trying to write the next chapter has become impossible. However, I'm gonna try to work on it and get it to you by Wednesday *crosses fingers* I don't know when my computer will be back, but, once it does, I'll be back on track. Sorry for the time lag between chapters :(
Author's Response: no rush dear! I know how it goes. =D And yeah, I think there's going to be two more really "intense" chapters and then we start to wrap it up but I'm not sure how long that will take yet. We are definitely over the top of the hill and on our way down the other side now though.
Date: 10/15/07 08:11 am Title: Chapter 13
*GASP!* Need... more!
Wow, so much is happening, I like it! :D
Hoping for more soon ;)
Author's Response: lol. love the response! I love driving my readers crazy. Ok, not my readers, but I do love driving my characters crazy! And I'd say they're definitely starting to lose it. =D
Date: 10/15/07 12:55 am Title: Chapter 13
Ok...Leah is definately confused...I'm so in love with this story I love the way you describe everything and all the drama...I love drama (Well in stories LOL) I hope you don't make us wait for an update to long... :)
Author's Response: I'm trying! This one is actually moving along quite nicely. And if you were Leigh, what would you do? I can't imagine what it would be like to be in her shoes and I'm the one who put her there. lol.
Date: 10/14/07 08:44 pm Title: Chapter 13
Better watch you don't go & break yer foot A.J. That would just makes things even worse than they already are - lol.
Oye vey. Everyone's gone crazy here! And Good on Baylee for standing up for himself! He's old enough to decide about that kinda stuff!
And poor B-rok. *shakes head* That book is STILL drivin' me CRAZY! I bet A.J. wrote about how he had sex before he became a priest - lol.
Author's Response: Patience my dear, patience! I promise, you will learn about the book all in good time. And yes, I imagine in a highly emotional situation like they're in, being stuck in the wilderness with one another would force the crazy to come out in everyone. :D That's what's so fun about this story.