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Reviewer: AngelgirlD Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/30/07 05:35 am Title: Chapter 12

Oh my god how they came together only faith wouldve have made that happen and how strong Howie became like a lion that he is defending his cub.  But Kevin ashes and poor Kristin its alot they are all stress out.  I loved it but you already know that.

Author's Response: When it comes down to it, they really were all best friends once and you know they would do anything for each other. Maybe thats what it will take to get them back together?

Reviewer: AngelgirlD Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/30/07 05:01 am Title: Chapter 11

Now I'm getting the hang of it AJ exploided Brian's secrets and feelings out for his own benefit but now I'm now quite sure what happen between Nick and him but I guess I can guess and it was that nick never found a middle ground but Brian either  in their own life style and path and clash.  Loving it and its so adorable the scences of Baylee and Howie is too cute.

Author's Response: Yes, that's part of what happened between Nick and Brian, but, as everything in this story, it's not that simple. Thanks again for all the reviews! I love that you're loving it!

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/30/07 04:46 am Title: Chapter 18

Haha. Frick & Frack - though not quite Frick & Frack in this fic - still crack me up! Lol.

And Baylee's adorable - ewven at age eleven! Lol.

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~ 



Author's Response: *sigh* Frick and Frack... Not quite Frick and Frack in real life anymore either. But I still love 'em! And yes, adorable Baylee! (Almost as adorable as my kiddies!)

Reviewer: AngelgirlD Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/30/07 04:36 am Title: Chapter 10

I thingk the storm of hail Kevin is pouring it down with the help oh a couple friend Angels to get tthings going because he was always the one that encourage everone that is neat if you didn't planned like that , well too bad that's how I see it ;) lol!  Also love the part that howie and baylee are together and that Howie grab him to ssafety.

Hold on, now I'm confuse what the heck is happening here?  But now I know what brian say in this whole mess but now I want to know what paret AJ play in this mess? Caused  this a huge big messed that everyone had a part just as well as being friends they were together thinck and thin and were are seeing the thin part now.  Loving the story.



Author's Response: Aww, I like to think that Kevin has a hand in a lot of what happens to these guys. He's kind of the theme, sort of... in a way... like he's gone, but not forgotten. *more tears for Kevin in real life* And yeah, I am totally in love with Howie and Baylee's relationship. They are too cute!!!! And all I can say is be patient for the AJ thing. All will come in good time. =D I can't believe how fast you're getting through this story.

Reviewer: AngelgirlD Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/30/07 04:05 am Title: Chapter 9

You know that the middle name of Howie is Dwaine right??  What a feiry scence that happen between Howie and Leigh I loved I got even hot to imagen howie so mad and demanding, gosh god only knows lol!  But poor Baylee is in the short end of the stick I hope howie can fix it.  Caused I know is not a bad guy.

Author's Response: Well, I imagine it's really hard to do, but even Howie could lose his temper. And if there was ever a reason too...

Reviewer: starbeamz2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/30/07 03:43 am Title: Chapter 18

Yay for another chapter LOL even though you must hate it. I just don't want this story to end LOL How did I know Brian would be the one to help Baylee out, hmmm? LOL I do hope Brian and Leighanne talk about SOMETHING (about their feelings for each other LOL). Anyhoo, things are definitely looking up! Write, write, write!

Author's Response: Hahaha am I supposed to take that as a hint? You KNOW I can't end this story without a Brian and Leigh conversation, but only I hold the key to the outcome *muhahahahahahaha* And things are looking up??? Who did you think was writing this story? rnrnHappily NEVER after, that just ain't for me! <--- that should be my theme song! rnrnThough the end of this one will probably be the least fairy tale-ish ending I've ever written. (with the exception of this months picture challenge lol, that doesn't count!) And YES MA'AM! *gives a trusty salute* I shall get writing right away! I started to finish Shadows this afternoon and then my dad showed up unexpectedly, lol. As if I'm not crunching a deadline or anything. lol. the nerve!

Reviewer: felikia2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/30/07 03:28 am Title: Chapter 18

ooo...i love flowers :) good update :)

Author's Response: yeah, flowers always make my day like you would not believe. Thanks. I think *crosses fingers* only one more to go (for real this time. lol)

Reviewer: AngelgirlD Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/30/07 03:17 am Title: Chapter 8

That is cute how baylee frown every second lol!  But I wish it wouldve been more between Howie and Leiganne but than again he is waiting for me lol!

Author's Response: Don't worry, you'll hear the whole story by the end. ;)

Reviewer: AngelgirlD Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/30/07 02:30 am Title: Chapter 7

Now, what happen with Brian and AJ??? It seem everyone fought with everyone before they left and now they are holding grudges.

"The rich olive complexion suddenly made the Puerto Rican traits of the boy clear as day and..." What is this Puerto Rican huh? Howie noooooooo! God that would be a killer twist to this meyham lol! but darn i thought i would get Howie not leighanne I thought Leighanne was for Brian...This is a typo isn't it?  If not when did this happen god caused the only one that I notice to be with her was Brian and I know I didn;t keep up with the story but I'm behind not blind and I read perfectly Gosh this so exciting lol! Its wicked it Loving it.

What the heck what a emotional and revealing scence whoa! I loved it how baylee and Howie saw each other and froze and then Leighanne go and faint that was great i cannot wait to read more so let me stop this rambling and continue... lol! Great !

 



Author's Response: hahaha no, that wasn't a typo! I knew everyone would expect a baby, but I knew no one would ever think it was Howie's hehe. Yes, very exciting stuff going on. Glad you're having a great time with it!

Reviewer: AngelgirlD Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/30/07 01:45 am Title: Chapter 6

What really happen i know that part of it was words said out of anger and hurt but what really happen???I have to keep reading to see.  Thats what I get from not keeping up with the story but hey I'm redeeming myself by not stoping lol! Great Loving it but I do not see my boy yet I hope he had found me...

Author's Response: no worries about falling behind! On the bright side you haven't had to wait with the others lol. I left a couple of HUGE cliffhangers in this story and nearly got strung up for it. (lol I was really bad this time, but you wont have to wait to find out what happened.)

Reviewer: AngelgirlD Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/30/07 01:18 am Title: Chapter 5

Leighanne Left so quickly so fish is not even funny maybe something in the oven and din't anyone to find out especailly Brian? I knew I knew she was pregnat.This is going to be huge especially about the saying that goes" small town big inferno" Everyone is going to know the minute she step a foot in that house, but its about time.  But its going to be a bomb. As you can tell I'm giving you feedback While I read lol! Man, Nicks its been the glue he is calling everyone and trtying to get hold of them, so they can have the chance to say goodbye to Kevin for the Last time.



Author's Response: Awww lol, I'm loving your feedback! It's kind of nice seeing your comments to earlier chapters because I only have one chapter to go, so all of this feels like forever ago. It's like a crash refresher course before I finish the story. I'm glad you're like it, and patience my dear, you man has definitely not been forgotten!

Reviewer: kevmylove Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/30/07 12:53 am Title: Chapter 18

Yeah girl your just getting us more into it and then it's over...boohooo...Just tell me how do you come up with all this stuff...this is my ultimate favorite AC story girl...don't make us wait to long for the ENDING...(Oh and you bet I will enjoy listening to Unbreakable tomorrow...LOL) Can you believe I got my best friend tickets to the Jimmy Kimmel show so if all goes well she will get to see the boys...on Friday night. boohoo (Without me)

Author's Response: Awwww, that was the way coolest friend thing of you to do ever!!! But why aren't you going with her??? If it wasn't five million miles away, I'd be there so fast! I AM DYING!!! Only a couple hours to go!!! It's going to be really hard to get anything written tomorrow. lol and I'm on a serious deadline. As for your questio, I have no idea how my brain comes up with all this stuff?? I'm pretty emotionally twisted really. I torture myself as much as I've tortured them all. ;) Actually telling stories has always just sort of come easily to me. (I have a very wild imagination) I think that's why writing is like one of my hugest passions. But I can't believe tat my little old story is your "ultimate favorite AC story" (especially since I had the nerve to kill off your man lol) that makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside, so thank you for the awesome compliment that just motivated me to finish this story by wednesday!!! You ROCK!

Reviewer: AngelgirlD Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/30/07 12:51 am Title: Chapter 4

This is a sad chapter, but good but I still can't believe Kevin gone and leave everyone behind...while I was reading this chapter I felt lost, sad and almost about to cry, gurl you know how to make a girl cry.  Good Brian is back maybe they can reunite eventhough the actual encounter was a bit sour for all counts. Also I'm glad that Kevin didn't kill himself, the poor guy just wanted to return to his happy and memorable place but he was so drunk that he didn't see anything else.  I cannot wait to keep reading.

Author's Response: awww, you're back, yay! (And you have no idea what's ahead of you.) lol this has to be the craziest story I've ever written. Quite the emotional roller coaster, so brace yourself and have fun! As always, love hearing from you! Your comments mean a lot! Thanks hun!

Reviewer: Nijntje Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/28/07 07:22 pm Title: Chapter 17

Great chapter again. I can't wait for the final chapter!

Author's Response: lol, sorry, you still have to wait for the final chapter. I thought this would be it, but sometimes things just run away from me... five hundred pages later... lol thanks hun! Always excited to see you reading along!

Reviewer: Maggie Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/26/07 04:06 am Title: Chapter 17

AAgh! Don't leave me hanging like that!

Author's Response: LMAO for once I actually thought I wasn't ending with a cliffy! Too funny! BUT, the end is in sight!!! Yay!