Date: 07/27/07 04:16 am Title: The Lost Girl - Brian
gosh you are killing me in suspense you know I'M VISUAL AND WITH THIS DESCRIPTIONS GOD IT MAKES IT VIVID Love it but scary lol!
Author's Response: I'm sooo glad that you guys find this story highly descriptive and vivid. It makes me happy that my words could paint a visual picture within your minds. =)
Date: 07/25/07 12:43 am Title: The Lost Girl - Brian
wow, you had some really great descriptions in this chapter. Very creepy backstory on the little girl as well!
Author's Response: Thank you!! Things will only start to get more... creepier, if that's even possible. Lol. =)
Date: 07/24/07 02:50 pm Title: The Lost Girl - Brian
Ohhhhhhh you got me on edge girl. i love the way you describe everything around the story it makes me feel like i'm in it lol.
Author's Response: Why thank you!! I'm really glad that you are enjoying the story thus far, I shall be posting a new chapter. =)
Date: 07/24/07 12:37 pm Title: The Lost Girl - Brian
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! I so NOT would continue with this mission.. Gosh..
Author's Response: Lol, I wouldn't either!! I was re-reading my story late last night, and can you believe it made me just a *little* scared (because I hate The Grudge with a passion, that movie scares the shit outta me!!) Lol. I'm sucha dork!! =)