Date: 10/09/08 08:57 am Title: Test Of Faith
Jesus, how horrible. Poor Brian... I would run my ass out of there if I were him. I can't believe you left us hanging like that! Gah!
You have a wonderful way with words. I love your writing... very descriptive and it flows rather nicely. I loved the image (weird to say I know...) of Brian entering the chapel and catching the stench of the musty dried blood. Very vivid. I felt like I was smelling it along with him lol
I can't wait until the next update! This was awesome!
Date: 10/08/08 03:24 am Title: Test Of Faith
I really liked Brian's prayers and such. That was intense last scene though I could really feel Brians emotions and almost smell the odor, but thats probably because ive worked with cadavers in anatomy. : ) im glad you updated this!
Date: 10/08/08 02:34 am Title: Test Of Faith
WTF?! Dude, Rupert! You suck! You make us wait this flippin' long for an update and then you cut it off there?! What the Hell dude? Are you SERIOUS?! That's just wrong! I am so going to karate you! But other then that, glad to see Brian get some action! *grins* Gotta say, you had my mind whirling with images while I was reading about the dare. I literally pictured a very vivid image of a fictional chapel, and the darkness, shadows...*giggles* Totally creepy dude. But I so love it. I suppose I should just start embracing the paranormal because it won't leave me alone. LoL. Oh well...maybe that's why I like this kinda stuff. Anyway, your cliffie sucked because you suck because I say so, but the premise of the cliffie rocked. And who better to see that then Brian? *grins* *le sigh* Keep up the good work and update soon, or I will so karate you for real! [Ashley]