Date: 06/01/08 02:32 am Title: Taste Of Blood
What did cling to Kevin ??? Because something did and nick is sensitive, he sense but really didn't know so just let go...and who's blood was it then if not Kevin???I cannot wait to see what happen next.
Date: 05/31/08 06:46 pm Title: Taste Of Blood
Creepy Rebellious.. very very creepy..
Date: 05/31/08 12:26 pm Title: Taste Of Blood
Nice, things are getting even more interesting.
Date: 05/31/08 05:33 am Title: Taste Of Blood
Crazy!!! Can't wait to see what happens with crazy Kevin. Great job with this chapter!
Date: 05/31/08 12:42 am Title: Taste Of Blood
Oooh creepy with the coldness and weird Kevin but not really Kevin. Nicely done!
Date: 05/31/08 12:00 am Title: Taste Of Blood
Ooh yay! I'm the first one to review! Damn straight! That royalty should be reserved for me! LoL. And if it isn't, someone will have to answer to Spidey! *grins* So damn, I'm totally thinking that Kevin is possessed, literally. Don't know by what, whether it's just some jacked up ghost or some demonic spirit, but he's really acting whack and if I was there I would have to drop kick his ass and tell him to wise up. Seriously, it seems like the type of situation where I'm expecting Dean and Sam Winchester to come bursting through the door and ghost bust Kevin's ass. Would have loved to of seen more action in this chap, but I realized you're setting it up for the action to come in the next chap. And I think the friction you added worked perfectly. I still don't trust Kevin. Hope you don't wait so long again to crank out another update. Because if you try to, I'ma send Spidey your way! Haha! Keep up the great work PR! [Ashley]
Author's Response: LOL. I have many spots for royalty (well, five to be exact), and you're one of them!! =] And yess... Kevin is possessed!! I said in a previous review that I'd ease up on Kevin a little, but that spirit just likes him for some reason. And yah, that is something where you'd expect Sam and Dean to bust in and shoot a silver bullet into his heart or throw rock salt at him, but they're not there. :( Next story, I'm totally bringing Sam and Dean in... cause they're hot!! Lol. I was debating whether I should've added the dare with this chapter, but I decided to hold off, to prolong it I guess, lol. As the days wind down, the more suspenseful and action filled the fic will become. I'm pulling up my other stories right now to see if I can make any progress with it, but it won't be too long for another SP update to come out. And please don't send Spidey after me... I really don't want to make Sharky eat Spidey. =] Lol.
Date: 04/30/08 11:28 pm Title: Unexplainable
Ooh this is getting creepy!!! Especially the part about Kevin having to lay in one of the holding blocks in the wall. OMG I'd have freaked LOL Curious to see where this is headed next
Date: 04/30/08 03:55 am Title: Unexplainable
AH! Again very scary moment. Good thing i'm not reading this in the dark! I still love this story...fell in love with the from the very beginning. Keep up the great work!
Date: 04/30/08 03:41 am Title: Kevin's Second Encounter
Holy cow! That is just a little scary! But I love it....
Date: 04/29/08 06:30 pm Title: Unexplainable
Ugh.. everyone's been hurting my sweet sweet Kev lately (honey and you!!).. What did he ever do to you, huh?!! ;) Great chapter though! I hope that doesn't mean you expect two 'Fireflies'-updates though?!!
Author's Response: Oops, lmao. I don't mean to pick on poor Kevy (I freaking miss the guy!!) but for some reason, the spirit likes picking on Kevin. Hey, it's a change from always putting Nick in peril, lol. But I'll take it a little more easy on your Kevy Kev... wait, on second thought, I can't do that... lol. And you best have like... 10 chapters to update "Fireflies" with... because I'm gonna be on a roll girl!! Lol.
Date: 04/29/08 02:46 am Title: Unexplainable
Yet another brillint chapter. This was good. I feel that the tense is going to get bigger and better. I want to find out what will happen to Kevin, will he be able to fight back the ghost that's possessed him? What's going to happen!! Can't wait to read the next chapter. ^_^
Author's Response: Haha, like I said in a response to a review, the evil spirit likes Kevin for some reason, I really don't know why, lol. And we're just gonna have to see if Kevin will be able to overcome it, or what'll happen... O.o Thanks for the review Kagoma!! =]
Date: 04/29/08 01:48 am Title: Unexplainable
The ray of light shining in my day that has been rather crappy so far. Props to AJ for going to the rescue. I suppose getting caught up in a moment can cause adrenaline to conquer even the most outstanding fear. I have to admit that it was rather abrupt for the moment when Howie appeared behind AJ outside of Pelowski's room. Again, that is a good thing that fed into the heart racing, blood running cold aspect of the situation. Although AJ handled it rather well. I know if it was me, my hand would have shot out and decked him before I even knew who was standing beside me. You delivered this wonderfully once again and I have to give you major kudos for continuing with this story. This is definitely something that would be a shame to see it just left unfinished. Can't wait to see another update. Keep up the great work! And just a quick finishing thought...since my ADD tends to kick in at the worst times and I was just about to click the "submit" button... Are Brian and Nick going to be visiting the hospital again before all of this is over? I mean seriously, it's only fair. I say lock Nick in the morgue with all of the spirits of the dead people. Then again that is just me. I have a twisted sense of humor. Hmmm...maybe we should collaborate. LoL. [Ashley]
Author's Response: LOL. Yah... Mare also mentioned that it was different to see AJ be the hero when he normally appears to be the "I'm not doing shit" guy, lol. But like I said, I tend to make AJ the vulnerable one in my stories, so I wanted to switch it up by having him step it up, lol. And as for the reaction AJ had towards Howie, haha... I think I'd be too scared to turn around to see who was standing behind me or whatever, especially knowing I was in a haunted place. But I wanted Howie to appear "eerie" like that... break him away from being "Sweet D" and made him "Stealth D", lol. And yess... Brian and Nick are DEFINITELY going to be going back into the hospital soon, lol. This upcoming chapter, some of the boys will think otherwise with continuing the dares and whatnot, but someone wants to continue... wonder who it could be. O.O Lol. And I would definitely LOVE to collaborate with you on a story!! I love collaborations!! =]
Date: 04/28/08 07:27 pm Title: Unexplainable
I don't know what is going to happen but the room of that pshyco is really important and maybe just mabey has the way to end all of it...I'm assuming. But thank god Howie is alright evethough I find it fishy the way he appear to AJ like that without saying a word. He could've call on AJ instead of touching his shoulder and then talking. Something is not right with Howie I just know it. I know my baby lol! Let me continue reading this chapter.
After, I continue reading it seems Howie was back to normal but I could be wrong! and who is the shadow, is Pwoski??? whatever his name is lol!
Great update, and I'm glad that you are back and thanks to give me my Howie fix lol!
Author's Response: Hehe, yah... they don't call Howie "Stealth D" for nothing, lol. I don't know why, but I just wanted Howie to approach AJ like that... I guess I kinda wanted to lead ya'll to believe that he had been possessed by a spirit, lol. Nah... he's not possessed, the spirt likes Kevin for some reason... I don't know why. And as for the shadow dude... well, I'll let you figure that out, lol. Thanks for the review hun, and no problem for supplying you with your "Howie fix" ;)
Date: 04/28/08 07:22 pm Title: Unexplainable
ah freaky! Update soon!
Author's Response: Haha, thanks!! Working on another update!! Will be up soon!!
