Date: 08/10/07 03:39 pm Title: Never Gone
That was beautiful. Great job!
Author's Response: Aww, thank you Mare!! I was hoping people understood it and the "personal fight with the inner demons" and all the metaphors and stuff didn't throw you guys off. I really want to get into tear-jerker stories and write them well!! =)
Date: 08/10/07 03:41 am Title: Never Gone
Aww... that was really cool! I have tears in my eyes. I loved it!! Great symbolism and imagery and all of that good stuff - like I said, very cool! I had a feeling the whole "drowning" part was just a metaphor, but that's what was cool about it. Great job on your first tearjerker! =D
Author's Response: I wanted it to be a tear-jerker, but as I read it and reread it again, I wasn't sure if people would take it as that, so I focused more on drama, because that was it mostly was. But I'm glad that it affected you in a sense I wanted it to. =) Thank you Jules!!
Date: 08/09/07 07:18 pm Title: Never Gone
That was Really good!
Author's Response: Thank you!! I really hope you liked it!! =)
Date: 08/09/07 05:49 pm Title: Never Gone
Beautiful story
Author's Response: Thank you!! =)
