Date: 01/03/14 01:01 am Title: Chapter 7
Yeah, an update! I loved it! I really love how you write Kevin/Nick in this story. Can't wait to read more!
Date: 12/31/13 01:39 pm Title: Chapter 7
im liking it cant wait for more
Date: 10/30/13 02:13 am Title: Chapter 6
Can't wait to find out what's in the tree and what the heck is going on! Great Chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! :)
Date: 10/29/13 08:45 pm Title: Chapter 6
Well, seems like mean cliffies are contagious! I only hope you are nice as I was when it came to updating every week! I was so happy to see you did this chapter in Kevin's POV. I loved knowing what was going on in their heads. Got a lot of warm and fuzzy feelings when he was talking about how much Nick has grown and how he and Howie used to look out for him. Nick mentioned that in one of the last chapters of his book. Loved that! Great chapter. For some reason, I thought this was taking place a little more in the past, before Lauren. I don't know why I thought that? But regardless, loved it and need more soon-ish!
Author's Response: I think they are. If so, I think it's your fault. ;)
Nick did?? I didn't know! I have his book, but haven't finished reading it.
I'll try to update soon. Thanks again for reviewing, Mare.
Date: 09/14/13 10:56 am Title: Chapter 5
Caution: Long review ahead!
Yikes! That was a pretty mean cliffy!! You have me so curious as to what's happening in that forest! Very creative and original idea and that random laughing is just creepy. I think there's nothing scarier than laughter coming from an unidentified source. I hope you update this again soon. I'm a little nervous after looking at your original posting date and how long it took you to update lol
It's really good, Bob! You shouldn't doubt yourself as much as you seem to do with this story. Be confident in what you're writing and let your readers decide if it sucks or not.
Just a tip for you about those author's notes, if you start them all with "I think this sucks." You're putting that thought into the people's heads before they read it. I know when I see that, I tend to just click away and not even bother to read figuring "Well, if the author thinks it's sucks, why should I even bother?"
For what it's worth, I think you're capturing Nick's personality and voice quite well. If I didn't feel like it was authentic, I most likely wouldn't have continued on. So, please don't leave me hanging for too long! I have enjoyed waking up to something brand new to read the last few days! :O)
Author's Response: Yeah, even I still don't know what happened exactly ;)
I think laughter is scarier than the usual stuff that you hear in scary movies.
I promise I will update soon! Hopefully next week, if that suits you? ;)
I see where your comment about the author's note is coming from and you're right, it's not a smart thing to do. I promise I won't do it anymore.
And I am doing a happy dance about you saying I'm capturing his voice quite well.
Right now I am trying to find one of the other guys'voices. ;)
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Date: 09/13/13 11:11 am Title: Chapter 4
This was a great chapter, Bob! LOL You did a great job with your descriptions and because I'm a sucker for randomness I really did laugh out loud at that kitten wearing orange boots line. So, two days? Wow! Can't wait to see him reunite with the boys.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you found my descriptions enjoyable and good! Yeah, two days.. even I wonder what happened during that time. ;)
Date: 09/12/13 11:57 pm Title: Chapter 3
Yikes! Very creepy ending there!! running around in circles and always ending up in the same place would be the MOST frustrating thing in the world. He needs to stop going out into the woods by himself!
I loved how Nick was trying to analyze what was happening and why and if the guys were playing pranks on him. Very cute!
Author's Response: You do realize Nick isn't the smartest of the bunch, do you? ;) Thanks for your review!
Date: 09/10/13 11:00 am Title: Chapter 2
So, you really had no idea the guys spent a month living together in London? And even weirder still, it was Brian who seemed to do most of the cooking. Nick mentioned he made a mean breakfast burrito! You should search out some of their interviews they did before the album came out! You'll get a kick out of it.
I enjoyed this chapter. Not sure why you were so unhappy with it. The only thing I found just 'slightly' confusing was for some of the conversations, it's hard to tell who is saying what, but in my head I was able to picture which guy was which. The jogging thing though, it took a little bit to realize it was Nick who wanted to go jogging. I thought it was Kevin. LOL
Finding a key in the middle of the woods while invisible girls giggle is never a good thing, Nick!
Author's Response: I'll respond to this review later, Mare, but thanks so much for reviewing!
Date: 09/09/13 12:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
Your summary made me curious so, I read the first chapter. Great start! I love the idea of them all living together in a cabin in the middle of nowhere. Isn't it funny that they really did this in London? Maybe they read your first chapter years ago and said "Hey! That sounds like a great idea!" I'm curious to see what you have planned and congrats to you for stepping out of your comfort zone. It's never an easy thing to do.
Author's Response: LOL!
They did? I didn't know.. that's kinda creepy if you think about it.
Thanks for your review, Mare.
Date: 09/09/13 03:12 am Title: Chapter 5
I love this story!! I Can't wait to find out what is after Carter! The suspense is killing me haha
Can't wait for another update!
Author's Response: We can't have that! Maybe I should stop writing all together. ;)
Date: 07/10/12 04:52 am Title: Chapter 4
Holy crap! TWO days!?!?!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response:
Hi Lenni! Thanks for reading :)
Can't promise an update soon though..
Date: 02/20/10 04:51 am Title: Chapter 1
You definitely need to continue writing. This is a great story. I can't wait to see what you come up with.
Date: 02/17/10 11:43 am Title: Chapter 3
Things are taking a sinister turn here, I wonder what'll happen next!
Date: 02/17/10 11:35 am Title: Chapter 2
Ooo interesting stuff, I wonder what they are? Mmm, those pancakes sound yummy too :)
Author's Response: They do, don't they? I wish I had the recipe ;)
