Date: 09/25/07 01:06 am Title: Chapter 1
Oooo I LOVE it now I am requesting for Brian and Alex to fall for each other..and perhaps something goes wrong with one of them..I like your idea..I like the flow so far Great Job :)
Author's Response: lol, maybe they'll fall over each other trying to get the hell out of there.. you never know..
Date: 09/24/07 11:41 pm Title: Chapter 2
Sounds good so far, I liked it, hope to find out what the laughing is about. Update soon
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! I'm feeling really insecure about this story so far..