Date: 12/29/08 12:04 pm Title: Prologue
Yay for updates! I finally found the time to read chapter 17! :D And I gotta say it's great! You've done a great job creating the contradicting feelings Brian experiences after finding out who Mac 'really' is. It's so understandable that he's furious and still in love at the same time. You've balanced that out perfectly. Cause it wouldn't be believable if he was immediately out of love or if he forgave her straight away. Can't wait for another update! :D
Date: 12/14/08 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 17
I am so excited to see an update for this story, I really love it. What an intense chapter, I feel really bad for both of them and I have a feeling things are going to blow up pretty soon. Great chapter and hope to see more soon.
Date: 12/14/08 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 17
OMG! Is it true? Is this really an update? I can't tell you how glad I am to know you two are still writing this story. I must admit, it is one of my favorite stories on AC.
And now, it's getting really juicy and the suspense is building. Brian knows that Mac is investigating Avenging Angel, and they both feel like they're acting to deceive the other. And yet, it all comes so naturally to the lovebirds. Yikes! Drama, drama, drama.
BTW, Sarah, that was an AWESOME update. =) Well worth the wait! Hopefully there will be more updates in the future.
Date: 05/14/08 09:01 am Title: Chapter 16
OMG...that was amazing. AS ALWAY. Can't wait for more. Poor Brian. Keep up the good work :-)
Date: 05/14/08 04:20 am Title: In the Shadows...an Interlude
I'n not sure why I haven't read this earlier.. but now I'm glad I did! Great job Starbeamz!! :D
Date: 05/14/08 04:11 am Title: Chapter 16
OMG.. Poor Brian.. And Mac too actually, even though she doesn't know now that Brian knows about her being an agent.. Can't wait to see how (and if) this is going to work out..
Date: 05/13/08 04:59 pm Title: Chapter 16
I am loving all the recent updates. This thing is going to get really interesting now that Brian knows about Mac. Awesome update, can't wait for more.
Date: 05/07/08 02:06 pm Title: Chapter 15
good chapter..cant wait to see how Brian is going to react to all of this.
Author's Response: yeah, should be interesting! We'll update again soon!
Date: 05/06/08 10:33 pm Title: Chapter 15
oooooh no.....this is definitely gonna be bad. and i love the miss congeniality comment :D it is more like that than nicky thinks :D
Author's Response: hehe yeah, much more than he thinks. I love things with double meanings. As for how bad it will be? well... you'll just have to wait and see. But not too long I'm already half way done with the next chapter.