Reviews For In the Shadows
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Reviewer: Nijntje Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/08 02:16 pm Title: Chapter 1

Hey girls! Just wanted to let you know I'm reading this story! I really like it so far!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/02/07 03:12 pm Title: Chapter 1

Is Brian "Batman" lol, I love that part.... I gotta better word... Batman!

Author's Response: lol yeah. Not exactly Batman, but we chose him because Bruce Wayne was just a guy too. he didn't have any super powers either.

Reviewer: Maggie Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/01/07 04:16 am Title: Chapter 1

Whoa... Girls, I can't wait to see this in action! It's obvious Brian is this "Avenging Angel," but I can't wait to see him actually do it. Keep it up!

Author's Response: hehe I just wanna see him in a cape and tights. ;)

Reviewer: felikia2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/01/07 12:19 am Title: Chapter 1

this story is very very good. one slight mistake noticed, i think. you said brian looked into four sets of eyes, but kevin wasnt with the group so shouldnt it be three? unless someone else was there i didnt know about. but still very good :)

Author's Response: Awwww, see. In my heart I still think Kevin is there. *sigh* Thanks though. I already went back and changed it. (even though it hurt to do so.) Thanks hun!

Reviewer: MonkeyAbu Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/30/07 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 1

This was a really good continuation from the prologue. The reunion between the fellas was written perfectly...the tension between them all, the emotions, etc... Plus not to much information on Brian's absence was given, which is a good thing because it leaves the reader wanting to find out more. Brian's return wasn't overloaded with a lot of things and I like it that you guys wrote it out that way. good job and I hope to see an update soon! [Ashley]

Author's Response: Wow Ashley, that was a great review. Very constructive, thank you. Glad you liked it.  We should be able to keep up with the updates pretty regularly. At least we're hoping! Thanks again!

Reviewer: steffi Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/30/07 09:09 pm Title: Chapter 1

Yeah update! I am excited about this story, I can't wait to see where it goes. It feels like a real comic book super hero story. I love it and can't wait for the next update.

Author's Response: Yay! We were trying for a comic book feel, glad you picked up on that. Hopefully we can keep it up. And we're just as curious to see where thisone goes too so we should be keeping up with the updates. Thanks again Stef!