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Reviewer: Nijntje Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/08 06:50 pm Title: Chapter 9

Mac smirked at the look on AJ’s face when he realized that the pills were for menstrual cramps and quickly handed it back like it was infested with cooties. “Ooookay,” he said nervously. “So is that all you need or are we actually gonna have to get some… you know… some of the other things, too?”

That was absolutely hilarious!! I can totally see AJ (or Nick) act like that roflmao!

Reviewer: felikia2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/08/08 06:17 pm Title: Chapter 9

oh no!! brian left too early! good updates! i feel like i may have missed the other one lol. but its all good now, im caught up :)

Author's Response: aww, yeah we always seem to update like minutes before the rest of the authors on this site. lol. and they have been kind of far and few between so they can be easy to miss. But I'm glad you're all caught up now and still enjoying this story!

Reviewer: Sinara Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/08/08 06:19 am Title: Chapter 9

I'm glad Brian is finally starting to open up to Mac, but I have a feeling what he just witnessed is about to make things a lot more uncomfortable again. I think *someone* is jealous.

I feel bad for Mac, though. Everything she thought about the Boys has been totally destroyed. AJ turned out NOT to be her Prince Charming. Brian is no longer the fun-loving prankster of the group. Nick is just a total man-whore. Well, maybe THAT isn't so shocking after all. 

Great job guys! Keep up the awesome work. I can't wait for another chapter. 



Author's Response: aww well at the same time she's still having a good time and loves them all. It is kinda sad that AJ wasn't her prince charming after all, but I have an idea why he wasn't/ *giggles like a schoolgirl*

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/08/08 05:36 am Title: Chapter 9

Oye vey in a half shell! Dammit Brian! Sometimes you just hafta stick around a little logner to see the final result! Holy Hell, NO killing anybody know just 'cause you're pissy an' dunno why! Oye vey!

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~ 



Author's Response: lol Lenni, maybe he shouldn't have been spying on her at all. But we should be thinking its a good thing he's upset right? even if he's too dumb to see it yet?

Reviewer: Maggie Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/08/08 04:51 am Title: Chapter 9

You love those cliffhangers, don't you? Aaack! Excellent chapter, but PLEASE... don't make us wait too long for the next one. :P Please?

Author's Response: Aww Maggie, what would a story be without a good cliffy at the end of the chapter. (hehe we're evil) thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/08/08 04:39 am Title: Chapter 9

good chapter!

Author's Response: merci whoever you are. =D