Date: 01/31/08 04:40 am Title: Chapter 12
Hoo-wee! Well, I hope your goal of a chapter a week works out, cuz I can't stand the wait!
That was tense.
Date: 01/30/08 11:45 pm Title: Chapter 12
awesome chapter!!
Date: 01/30/08 07:00 pm Title: Chapter 12
finally! even if it was very strange how it happened haha. but finally!!! :D
Date: 01/30/08 08:36 am Title: Chapter 12
Wow! That was one of the best kissing scenes I have read in a while. Great job.
Date: 01/30/08 08:17 am Title: Chapter 12
YES! It's about time! I was getting a little frustrated with Brian myself. I'm surprised Mac was able to hold back her anger for so long. But hey, I can't be too mad because it led to that kiss.
I can't wait to read the next chapter. This story is rapidly becoming one of my favorite stories. Keep up the great work.