Date: 04/23/08 08:16 pm Title: Chapter 14
Oooh... You girls seriously have the most creative ideas! I LOVE the whole Brian as a superhero idea. It's very orginal, but just orginal enough to completely work. And it IS getting good! I have a feeling that overhearing all of this might just make the Avenging Angel more sloppy and do something REALLY stupid although I hope not. I'd love to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks, Mel! We feed off of each other's crazy, original ideas and end up with amazing ones! Glad you like it so far, and, yes, the good stuff is about to really get going! Thanks for reading!
Date: 04/21/08 09:30 pm Title: Chapter 14
really good chapter..it keeps getting better and better...i can't wait until Mac finds out about Brian being the Avenging Angel
Author's Response: Aww, thanks! Yeah, I don't think we can wait until Mac finds out about Brian either lol Soon, it's all in the works!
Date: 04/21/08 07:09 pm Title: Chapter 14
I was so happy to see this story was updated! LOVE LOVE LOVE it and can't wait for another chapter =D
Author's Response: Thanks so much! We love love LOVE that you love it! Updates will be way more frequent than they were lol Hang on!
Date: 04/21/08 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 14
oooo.....its gonna be nasty when it does break that he is the avenging angel. and i bet the feds are gonna come to take her home, sorta like in miss congeniality. loved it!
Author's Response: LOL Yay for Miss Congeniality! Great movie lol Yeah, things aren't going to be so pretty and fluffy soon. Thanks for the review!
Date: 04/21/08 05:12 pm Title: Chapter 14
Yeah! I was so excited to see an update. And I can see that the sh*** is hitting the fan for Brian and Mac. I love it! Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Yay! Thanks, Steffi! Yup, things are about to go all sorts of interesting for Mac and Brian, and you should definitely stay tuned for the next chapter!